TRASH

well my journey of reviews is over i feel like this story is getting out offhand to rushy for me although the parts of chatting where sweet. I'm going to stop reading here

ok although i still think the story is a bit rushed, i was laughing my fucking ass off when chatter and aang tease sokka , I've still got tear in my eyes AHAHAH

ugh don't use snog use what sokka would say, like in the comics, don't give me the oogies. ugh why

the very beginning was to rush, and why make an that childish and right on a specific more grphic scene, i don't get it, although the part where sokka comes in is funny

again, don't make this too rush its making me lose interest ugh

ok so far ok, it really sounded familiar so you did a pretty good job, i didn't like your other stories, i feel they were to rushed and dull,like i didn't feel it was as realistic at it should have been. I'm not sure if it was you who made the story of them going to school and hakoda dies where that scene was so rushed i just stopped reading, katara said things i think she would never had said in the original series. never do a fan fiction of avatar like that. For kataang try and use some ideas from the comic, like when they call each other sweetie and have those moments alone, ect. i hope in the next chapters there is going to be some good scenes of it, I'm seriously obsessed with them i feel they are couple goals. So in my opinion don't make it too rushed and try and make it as realistic as possible, like it was an actual continuing of the real series. Although i do know you made this in 2007 its really useless to write this, but i still wanted to do a review so, toodles!

You are my favorite author!

I know what u mean bra

That train epsoide u know when azula and mai and tai lee chase theme down

Your A/N's are awesome

I don't know if I like the A/N's or the story more... roflmbo

32 and addicted to ATLA... LOVE your A/N's

I LOVE your A/N's... lmbo

God Dang I hate Zutara! Btw,the canon charries are a little OOC... (No offense..)