o no whats going to happan to dem my heart is racing im scared. will they get there in time?

gasp macavity is cheating on deme for griddlebone shame on him { hisses at griddlebone}

now macavity and demeter i can deal with whats going to happan next?

again not to be mean deme is with munk munk is not with jem. i love this story!

go munkustrap { gives munk a big hug} will dem and munk get together or will jem and munk get together?

not to be mean but demeter is with munkustrap not plato. i like the story though. macavity is flirting with dem not suprised XD i can picture all of this in my head

Hmm. Its okay, but kan u add Serious Plato and Victoria fluffiness? Please?

awesome chapter! hope you can update soon!

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I like the plot, it is developing so good but I can see you havent uploaded in a time.

You should though.

If you upload a chapter more I will even sign up to have logged reviews

Well, i read most of your story again and i really like the pairings you chose to do. they're different but work pretty well.

keep writing!

DNDK 38

Woot Woot! Go you! i love this story. it's freaking awesome. i think i'm going to read it from the beginning again even though you're not finished 'cause it's just that good!

Misto and Jem all the way!

DNDK 38

its CUTE! I got the giggles! keep up the rockin' fluffiness between Plato and Victoria! XD

hmm, it's alrite, but u need some more Plato/Vic fluff.

I really liked the story and the plot is amazing.

EVERYTHING

you have everything here and you must upload soon

please

I really enjoyed your work

Aww this chapter's so sweet :3