| Reviews for Mahou mo Ken |
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twolfe81 chapter 10 . 6/21 While I can’t reasonably expect an author to pick up a story after all this time, I must say it is still quite an enjoyable one and really wish we could see what comes next. |
Time313 chapter 5 . 5/23 It took a while and a lot of skimming, but I am finally grooving the story. Dammit, it's going to take several rereads. |
stylo1 chapter 8 . 5/22 meh learning a new kind of magic while you still suck at the other one. letting teachers and students attack you and ofc taking he blame from dumbledore like a pussy. most of that eastern magic is beyond lame really the only usefull thing she taught hary was mind magic sword fighting bending spells away and about ley lines and of this voldy prob only doesnt know how to use a sword not that harry does given it takes a life time to learn not 2 months. yeah you lost me with harry continuing his pussy act |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 10 . 5/2 Damn! You can't just tease us like that and leave! You are giving us blue balls! Please don't leave this in hiatus! Update this soon! Can't wait for the next chapter! And harry needs to steal a few books off Dumbledore. Would be interesting. Maybe harry should do a ritual to gain a doujutsu? Lol! |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 8 . 5/2 Damn... harry should get magical oaths from the lot of them! What the hell keeps them from spreading his teachings! He even let in ernie! Why is harry being such an idiot! Has he not learned about traitors! All he teaches could very well go back to Voldemort! And why the hell were they practising where everyone can see them! Its a shame fred and George are not here. There are too many turn coats around. Harry is too trusting! He should have just moved off to Japan and killed off snape! Ugh... |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 5 . 5/1 Shit... that was rather stupid of harry. And wtf man! C'mon! Does harry really have to teach them all that stuff!? Hasn't he learnt from last year about traitors! And I think maya and harry would say chan at the end rather than san when saying brother and sister. And srsly? Evil TD and DG? This is becoming ugh! Sigh... what to do... |
Ferocious Nightfury chapter 4 . 5/1 Damn I really wish this was harry x maya instead of them thinking they are siblings! It would have been an awesome pairing! They could still have sex though. Are there going to be any of that in the future? And why does harry need to tell everything to ron and Hermione? I think I may have read too many ron and Hermione bashing stories but I wish they were not told everything like this. Is he going to be teaching his magic to them as well? Please don't! They can just have occlumency! They don't need to learn Harry's magic! |
tarheelsmaniac chapter 8 . 3/19 Ok I’m loving your story so far, and several of the others. My only complaint is how Maya and Harry call each other bro and sis. No actual sibling ever does that except when saying it heavy with sarcasm. |
Favanom chapter 2 . 3/16 Definitely wasn’t expecting the hard r in a Harry Potter fanfic |
Guest chapter 4 . 3/2 You do realize due that staffs had been used by druids of the Norwegian and Germanic countries for thousands of years before the people of China and Japan even considered the spiritual ideologies that they are now known to have within the Asiatic section of the world. Current archeological evidence points to the idea of them having been used by spiritual guru's and the like in Europe up to seven thousand years before China was even founded by the first emperor. As such I would believe that Europeans would be more understanding of the nature of them rather than people of Asiatic decent. As for the sword, the first weapons that can accurately be described as a Sword comes from Arslantepe, Turkey, which is part of both the Middle East and Europe, as such it would be right to say that swords are also of European descent as turkey is closer to Germany than it is to China and Japan or any of the other purely Asiatic countries. |
Lunar Moon Butterfly chapter 10 . 1/15 Take that! Snape you git. |
Face Yourself chapter 5 . 1/5 I wonder who DG and TD could possibly be? Because I know for certain that Daphne Greengrass and Tracy Davis would never in any universe have anything to do with Voldemort and his crew, so it clearly must be someone else. |
Crainium9 chapter 4 . 1/3 I’ve loved this story but the second half of this chapter has been a real turn off for me |
MartinDeShade chapter 1 . 12/22/2019 I read this first chapter because I enjoyed your current story 'Squatter'. I enjoyed but then I noticed it was last update more than ten years ago, so I put 'follow' on it and wait to see if you ever take it up again before reading the rest. |
Rebmul chapter 10 . 12/20/2019 well moldy is gonna be pissed he lost his best and truest spy hope fully this comes back |