Very interesting , indeed .

I've been thinking too that an amnesiac Miss Parker would make a promising story . And you just confirmed it .

PERFECT! JUST PERFECT!

I have no other words...

Nicely done. I never managed to watch Pretender to its conclusion. The TV stations here yanked it off the air too soon but I've always wanted to see Jarod and Miss Parker get hooked up together.

Now I'm off to start with Into Thin Air.

The ending was sad but hopeful, and I am glad that you included Debbie in your story, as there are not all that many stories about Debbie or which feature the character of Debbie.

The parts with Catherine and William in them were especially sad, and poor Tommy!

I guess Ethan probably would not be included in the sequel, would he? Or Emily?

All in all, this was a very good story - and the idea behind Project Cassandra was original and very unexpected - and, though I have not read Rain City, I would probably recommend that you write a sequel to this story, as I am wondering what might happen next, and what questions have been left unanswered, though, I guess, there is always the issue of the identity of Miss Parker's real father.

I wonder if Brigitte's baby was included in this story, or if that part was left out? And what about Sydney's son, Nicholas, and former fiance, Michelle? Does Sydney know they exist? What about Major Charles and Margaret, and Jarod's clone, Gemini? You see, there are still a lot of questions... )

On constructive criticism, I only wanted to say that this has been very interesting so far, but that I found the analogy about Debbie's smile to perhaps be too repetitive as you had used it before and it's the sort of analogy that is a bit of a novelty so you always remember it or when it is used again - I'm not saying that it is bad - but perhaps it is a bit too much of a novelty to be used twice in the one story, if that makes sense?

I wonder who the man in Broots's office is? It doesn't sound good...

You seem to have a good grasp of Broots's character, and you have a way of handling his character that doesn't just make him out to be - how should I put this - someone who is somewhat clueless and/or just does what he is told. Which is good!

Poor Jarod! Miss Parker is going to be so mad at him when she finally recovers her lost memory!

You're very good at writing about these characters, and in general, which makes me think you must have spent considerable time writing before you decided to write and post fanfiction - and you use a lot of different words, so your writing isn't predictably boring, because I notice, with my own writing sometimes, that that can happen, and then sometimes I'll just think of a word that I haven't used forever, or for a long time, and I'll be really pleased...

So far, I really like this story, so I'll see how it turns out in later chapters.

P.S.: I also have a poll that I have posted on my profile page - and I know it's really lame promoting it here - but I'd really love if someone would vote in it. Have a good day!

Two spelling mistakes: 'stirring-wheel' instead of 'steering-wheel', as in, to 'steer', or to 'steer clear', and 'fotos', which I think you meant to be 'photos'.

One last piece of constructive criticism: The commas are allowed to be inside the talking marks just the same as the question marks and elip-the three full stops thing...

Other than that - which didn't really harm this - so far, this was very well done, and I especially liked the line: And the hair. I could not get used to the hair.

It was a little hard for me, at first, to see the deliniation between what Broots was remembering - helping his daughter, Debbie, with her assignment - and what he was experiencing - Miss Parker appearing in his apartment.

Do apartments regularly have frontyards, I wonder?

In the way of constructive criticism, there was one 'he' that should, I think, perhaps have been a 'she', and that was all I could immediately see.

The last line is very foreboding. I hope nothing bad happens to Broots, but, I guess, if it does, it does.

P.S.: The description of the oil spill was sad!

I really liked it. I don't review often but I thought I wold give you a shout. I hope you keep writing.

Great story! *bows her head*

There were so many great things ... The whole thing about trust between Parker and Jarod ... Her inner sense ... The way you've described Lyle (I've loved the tapdance comment) ... Where Jarod has hidden the keys - and Parker's comment about it ... That you've mentioned Harry Potter, the Dixie Chicks and the x-files ...

I've just hoped that you would write some more chapters ... *sighs*

THX

God bless you!

Shalom

Thara

Hi

I just read your story WOW! It was great.

Loved the entire story.

Adored the ending. It's very metaphorical and still leaves it very open. Jarod and Miss Parker are together and happy.

That's all we wanted, LOL.

*applauds*

Very fitting Mr Parker was there to guide Miss Parker back. Any loose end seems to have been taken care of in a non doomsday y way as well, but without it being overly cheery too. Well done! :)