ROFL! GO WUFEI! lol. Loved the ending you had there, and I totally sympathise with him on wanting to order form the window without a car. lol. Damn them! Don't they realize the wait is shorter if you seperate it into two lines? Update soon please!

Thank you so much for depicting Relena like this instead of a silly airhead. This chapter was fantastic. I really liked it and their interaction.

OMG! This is amazing! Haha I couldn't stop laughing pls update soon, I can't wait to see what hqppens next!

ROFLMAO! I Love it! Please update soon! :D lol!

I feel conflicted right now. There're nine chapters total, and I don't know whether to continue. See, I found that the writing and the story did not match up here. Sudden, long- restrained confessions of love are a common occurance (especially when they come from Relena,) and I can't help but be bored by that. However, I think the way you made Heero was very interesting; he seems to be a much more contoured character in your mind. I also appreciate the genuine confusion he feels at the end. That seems more realistic, and as such is more interesting to me.

Also, your words are just lovely. Descriptions of eyes are very nice. But really, your prose just has a very comfortable flow, and a certain rhythm- in my opinion- that really makes one appreciate all the words you put into it. Does that make any sense?

So I think I will continue for the good points, because there are more of them than love- crazed Relena in this story.

WOMAN. I don't think I need to tell you to keep writing, but I'll do it anyway: KEEP WRITING.

Oh and for this?:

“We are not taking this chopper,” Heero resolved, “It’s against protocol.”

“Since when has Heero Yuy cared about protocol?” Duo questioned. A single brow disappeared into Heero’s brow. “Always?”

“Like that time you ‘assigned’ recruits to pick up your dry cleaning?”

“That was once,” Heero replied. How did Duo find out about that? He would have to be more careful who he gave such assignments too. Duo gave him a sly smile

“Then there was that time you used the company card to buy doughnuts…”

Heero arched an eyebrow, “I was hungry.”

“And that time when you did the same but bought the complete boxed set of every Harry Potter book ever written…”

“They are very good novels,” He said defensively.

“And I suppose that you just enjoy listening to the soothing sounds of Princess Britney Hilary Lollipop Star?”

Heero narrowed his eyes into slits, snatches the keys to the helicopter and storms out the door. Duo grins, mimicking the shooting of a basketball.

“He shoots, he scores!”

I think I love you. 3

Definitely didn't lose me after that... I was laughing hysterically. Keep up the excellent work!

I love it, I haven't laughed this hard in months please don't keep us waiting long for the next chapter.

Hey,

Gods I've missed alot huh, Well I'm so sorry for not reviewing sooner I've been very busy. But that's all cleared and shoved under carpets meaning I'm free to read and review. Gosh have I told you how much I love this fic, Cause if I havent then I really, really, REALLY should. this is all just SO PRICELESS. You know the advert. Well I'd have given anything... ANYTHING to see Heero and Duo's face when Noin made that comment. *laughs* I think I would have died right their but unfortunatly I can't cause that would mean I couldn't read more. One question tho, Was Wufei saying he was going to bed DC? I thought that's what it meant but I wasn't too sure since he could of meant it a different way. But meh neva mind.

Please update you God, Luv, Licks and Girly Nights

ha ha ha ha ha ha ha this is awesome! This is EXACTLY the kind of humor I like (well as well as other kinds... this makes no sense) anyway the fact remains that this is hilarious. I love it! KEEP IT UP!

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LMAO! I love that conversation in the car. I vote we talk dirty about Trowa next and have RELENA bring it up in retaliation for Cathy's remarks about "sexy Zechsy"

I love this story! I really love Gavin and Derik! He reminds me of my friend Mia! Anyway this a great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter! :)

haha, i can't wait for the girls' night out!

Umm... where did Heero go?

Oh dear sweet jeebus. Booty-quaking is...well, there's not much to say there, now is there. (Experiencing it first hand could kill you). Oh Derik is beautifully gay, thank you. Mahvelous chapter all around. Keep writing until it spirals into like, fourty chapters. Then I'll GIVE you alcohol. For free.