I meant 8 years, my bad.

Still love you, but damn, this makes a man angry. The mother of all cliffhangers.
I wonder what Haku will summon, how crazy Naruto has got, what the Beast Ninja Association led by Lady Fox has in store.
Sad this story is on hiatus for like 4 years now, sad PurplMoon-chan

What's your ring size? You've got me thinking of marriage rn.
Doesn't matter if you're a dude, where there's a hole, there's a way.
Absolutely loved this piece. Sad it's been over 7 years since the last update.

This story is most definitely not rated T. If the author is still active I recommend fixing it before it gets removed.

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

awesome more please

the 4th's name is Minato Namikaze Damnmit!

Well. There are several things in this story that I find confusing. For one thing, just how old is Naruto? To me here, you've portrayed him as a small six year old. I thought he would be a twelve year old based on the fact of the mizuki incident and his third time failing the exam. No, you started out as such, but as you progressed into the story, his mind and personality degraded into a more childlike innocent persona. Why? With every passing chapter, he seems to be getting younger. And from the way he also is being described, his body is also reverting to a younger age?!

If this is in any way based on canon, then from what I've read on the Chunin exam, the sound genin, specifically Kin and her buddies, were around the same age as Naruto. In this chapter where Kin meets Naruto, it seems like he is at least half her age and is like a toddler to her, what with the size and maturity comparisons and all. Naruto is also acting like a little kid, with his little toy fox that he got and his seemingly angelic innocence. And the lullaby?! What is going on with Naruto.

Basically, this story has fallen out of bounds of a good read. You jump around with the scenes, making things difficult to follow, The scenes of animals kind of confused me to be honest, And the characters aren't that very believable and well organized. I'm surprised I've even read this far... Well not really, considering how lenient I was with your writing. So, I guess I'll just find something else to read.

"He gagged the ANBU captain carefully and considered."
Hey now, I didn't think it was that kind of story.

nice

Good story that steers away from the same old Naruto team seven and related story arcs. Liked how you made the environment wildlife alive with sentient awareness and sprinkled with a nice helping of the occult supernatural. Thank you for the time you spent writing this fanfiction.

You are shooting off enough ideas for four other full length epics, your imagination is awe inspiring~! I'm sorry your not says that you're getting out of Naruto fics, I've really been enjoying your creativity in this one.

In any case, thanks for the ride, and I'll certainly be staying with this story until you finish your arc.

yrs Larry Huss