Wow I loved this just wish you kept going

interesting idea!

Piece of crap

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

I love this fanfic. it's been years, I hope you didn't abandon this.
you even have a good writing on the fighting part, most writer can't pull it when they start with drama.
anyway keep up the good work :)

4/5

Kabuto’s was never a real Konoha him. He spied for orochi,Art for all 5main villages.

I hope you update this fanfic, it's been so much fun. I'm glad the story doesn't focus so much on the romance, instead packed with action. It's nice that you kinda changed everything but still managed to keep the characters to their original personalities, except for Naruto maybe, but I like Naruto's personality here. I get that his tragic mindset is irreparable, but it would be nice for him to know that if he dies, many people would be sad, even if he's an unemotional psychopath, everyone still loves him. Something like that. But this is your story though. Anyway, I'm just going to say that I really like this story. Update plss hahahah

I'm not really a NaruSaku fan but I think this fanfic is pretty cool. I like how careless Naruto is.

Now this is what i call an emotionally broken op character done right. I haven't read any other of your stories yet but i would love to see the growth of your depiction of naruto.

all the good fanfics are unfinished :

Author...I wish I could see you so that I can punch yah In di face! This fanfic was FUCKING awesome! Why the fuck did you adandon it?

Not really I mean Naurto seems to want to die considering his life I wouldn't blame him.

very good

you fucking dirty cunt