next chapter asap, i've been waiting neww chapters, because this is very nice and exciting

Nope, Mamori, just pretend nothing happened. Pretending will make life easier. Denial and Ignorance. That's all you both need. XD XP

Are you planning to write a sequel for this Fic? I hope so.

ah, your writing is really great. i wish you would write more hiru/mamo pairings!

You reep what you sew.

hehehehehehe lol hiruma always the best liar!

good writing! hahaha! loved every bit of it. pls do update if you have the time

Oh I love this! Hahaha.. UPDATE!

are you not going to update? *pouting face*

it was really nice,please finish the story~ love it!

arr dammit that was just too good *_* You write DAMN well... They don't even seem ooc to me at all. The first chapter was especially good. You really managed to caught some atmosphere there. Amazing.

I do hope you plan on continuing this fic T_T

Hirumamo FTW

wwaii ~ sugoii

hontoni suki desu

oh , sorry xP

i've been obsessed with HiruMamo

and i've practically read the whole fanfic bout them

and i didn't want to read the still progressing ones

but i had to choice xP

this fic was good )

please please continue

onegai desuu

sankk-you

Please, please, pretty pretty PLEASE continue this fic! There's a distressing shortage of ES21 fics of any type, and definitely not enough HiruMamo fics to go around, so PLEASE continue this fic! I'm so excited and I really wanna know how these two get (or don't get) their act together. I wonder what 'that night' would be like from Hiruma's pov, especially the butt-pinch.

I'm half awake writing this review so I'm sorry that it sucks. I just wanted to say that so far this fic is good. I can't wait until you update because I love this couple. until next time. .~

~Ana~

its almost 12 midnight.

heck I'm too sleepy to review and process this story in my mind.

but hey, this fic is good. kindly keep on going. we need hirumamo fics!

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