My first slash fic and congratulations to you for not turning me away! I'm in! I like the couple and I like the subtle way you portrayed them! so kudos!

Very well worth the read! I like it.

Aw, I loved this! I kinda like the idea of Hunter and Cam going out for coffee. :D

AW! That was adorable! You have a very smooth writing style and I thought that the story was not only fluid but well detailed, well written and very engaging. I can't wait to read your next story!

"The words struck something deep within him, and Cam realized what had changed since two days ago. Somewhere along his journey, he had finally let go of the bitterness that had plagued him since his teenage years. He had gotten to train, he had plenty of job opportunities waiting whenever he wanted to follow up on them, he was a ranger…he was finally in charge of his own life, and he was finally living the way he wanted to."

why are you such an awesome writer? coffee as an analogy? wow.

/envy

This was wonderful. I loved the way you explained Cam's behavior and his past. Also the way you gave him an avenue to change through not only his experiences, but through Hunter as well. Great story.

I really liked how you used Cam's black coffee drinking as a metaphor for his bitterness. I really liked this story period, haha. :favorites:

Aww, this was an incredibly cute and sweet fic. Cam is a great character. _

Oh wow, that was awesome. How could I've missed this? This is definitely going into my fav stories and author alert.

Story-telling was exceptionally well done, very introspective and concise. Blending in well with fiction, with coffee as a metaphor (yay, with it being my fav beverage too!). Flow was extremely good too, very easy to follow as you switched effortlessly from the distant past (Cam's childhood), past (fighting Lothor), and present (Cam and Hunter hooking up).

For a first time effort, this definitely puts mine to shame. Great job, going on to read your next fic now!

Aw! This is such a cute story! It is also very well written!

“Have you exploded yet?” hahaha, oh how I chuckled. But Oh. My. God. That was AMAZING! Honestly, I havn't read something that wonderful in forever! I loved you're description, and the careful explanation of Cam's background and the thing with his mom. Oh, and I loved the thing about Tori as well. Also, the idea of Cam being gay before Hunter... had never really struck me before. I don't know why- I guess I always say Hunter as the gay one. But I loved Lukas, and the way they interacted. Especially at the end there. Oh goodness me, I am simply flabergasted. You make me want to go write like there's no tomorrow. WONDERFUL job. Please, keep writting! We seriously need another author like you in the community!

Awesome story! I love the background you gave Cam, the college days and his prior relationship, and the series blended perfectly in with the story. Lukas, Miko, and Hunter all had their parts and they were all done perfectly, and the coffee's symbolism was a good match. So many lines in this I just love, and the characters were perfect. Love it, great work!

Very cute and very well written. I really enjoyed this! It was cute without being sickeningly so, and the story flowed well without being unrealistic. Well done!

Excellent work, and very impressive for a first story! I really liked the background story you gave Cam: the college days and the first relationship - it was all very well thought-out and realistic. I am also impressed at the skill with which you made the transition into show canon from there on.

Both Hunter and Cam were very much in canon, and their dialogues flowed very nicely.

Again, great work for a first fic, and I hope it won't be your last. The world needs more good NS slash stories :)

Greetings from Dany

Great fic! It had great flow and you did a good job portraying the characters. Nice job for your first fic!