This fanfiction was written when I was only four (~‾‾)~

It’s good so far, don’t leave it dead

good story

I believe it's Asauchi.

Could you maybe put a list of the teachers and their subjects, other then that this is a great story!

I know that this is really late and that u probs don’t even look for reviews anymore but all I have to say is that I loved the story. I think it was a great idea and your writing style is pretty easy to understand. I only have a few critiques which would be, when you create oc’s like Katsumi and such, you should describe them at first meeting so reader’s can know he character looks like. When I was reading, I noticed you mostly used people names when speaking about them and I think it would be helpful if you would say for example the orange haired Shinigami to refer to ichigo sometimes. I also think that when shiro was talking, you should put the words in bold or bold italics just so we have a difference in character speech. Besides that I think it was a lovely fic and hope to see more from you Author-sama. (*︶*)

HOW DARE YOU! DUBBED HICHI SOUNDS AWESOME! XD.

Why must you write stories with such amazing ideas I feel inspired? Trying to do real life over here, stop being so distracting XD.

Ehhh... Really confused... The visards literally made a dramatic entrance and fought ALONGSIDE all the captains with their hollow masks in full view? And aizen actually gave ichigo a massive lecture about how he should have used his hollow mask if he wanted to beat him, yada yada yada... And everyone was right there and completely okay with it... And noitra never entered the living world... Did you mention this all earlier or am I being an idiot?

First, your grammar sucks. You use words that don't fit in the sentence, constant misspelled words in others. Second, there is hardly any character development, so far all we have is the hero worshipper who doesn't actually know what his hero looks like, and two other people, one we legit know nothing about and the other is... Well the same with boobs. There's no build up in the story, no real drama, just "insert name of class" happens, notes were taken. Nothing to make the reader curious about what will happen next besides boredom. As this was published and finished before the manga ended, none of the major key points are shown (like masaki actually being a Quincy) which isn't any fault of your own, but this story could use a revisit so as to include omitted materials of cannon. Good idea, bad execution. This isn't a flame, just trying to give helpful criticism so you can get better at writing.

aaand it just got dumb.

You just had to add Momoko as a character. Pretty disappointing

Ugh... I don't know if I'm the only one who feels this way... but Tomoko is so damn annoying. Every time she goes and reveals Ichigo, I just want to pull her hair and slap her face. Like GIRL! STOP! My god. Let the others found out themselves! It's so fcking annoying. It's not her secret for her to just tell anybody... I know I may sound like a b*tch, and I might be, but whatever...

Omg does Tomoko not understand the meaning of secrecy? She revealed Ichigo several damn times after their memories get erased. Just let them figure it out themselves. Maybe I'm being a cynical b*tch but she deserves Ukitake's threat. I mean it's not her secret to tell every. single. time.

They have 3 lunchtimes?! I want to go to a school that much lunchtimes