I always thought Nami must have been afraid because she didn't understand why Luffy didn't want to fight back and probably thought he wouldn't protect her either.

oh, i hadn't thought about this at all. sure Nami is pretty—one of the prettiest girls in the series, even—but i didn't think that she being angry was because of Sarquiss saying that he wants to buy her, instead of Luffy and Zoro not fighting back. this is a nice view to the scene (and it's Lunami!). Thank you!

Awee how cute. And sad, I feel bad for Nami. Honestly no one should ever have to hear someone even imply that they wanna buy them. The ending was adorable!

THIS IS CAN BE SEEN IN ROMANTIC AND FRIENDSHIP WAY! And I love it aha~~

Ahhhhhs:)

You know, this is what reeeeally bug me the whole time. That scene with them and Bellamy in Jaya.
I mean, I got it. Luffy got his reason just like Shanks back in Fuschia Island. I got that part all right. But not for Nami.
Nami was mad and had tears in her eyes when dragging Luffy and Zoro out in the manga, so I think she was pretty offended. Unlike when Vivi was offended with Robin (as Miss All Sunday) back then, they weren't standing up for Nami this time and I think that's pretty sad.

This is so...
And...
No words :,)

-lost of words- (aka speechless)

Awwwwww. Nice story, god I hate Bellamy. One of the best things in the entire series is the one punch beating he gave that prick.

Brilliant. I don't have much else to say, just thought you should know.

So sweet and sad. It's one of those fics that makes me really want to hug the characters. Weres Sanji?

This is just...beautiful.

Really!

I almost cried reading this. Maybe because I'm a girl with pride and I understand why they wanted to buy her... and I was also pissed that they didn't do anything! Bakas! This was realllllly welll done. Thank you for writing this!

LOVED the ending too!

GD

xx

:) awwwww, so cute

Very cute. Going in the favorites. I like how close you kept to the real story too. Good job.

Awwww that was sweet