This was so perfect I can't take it

Lovely!

I. Am. So. Jealous. Of. Your. Writing. Sigh. Everything is perfection and I absolutely adored A Separate Peace. this fic just made me remember it and all my feelings for it. Love you for writing such an adoring piece! heart

I can't

I just love this.

i saw it too. how can my entire SCHOOL be oblivious to the OBVIOUS sexual tension between the boys. That's the reason i came here, in order to read 'better' stories

I love how Finny is so unpredictable, he always seems to smile. They were in character the whole time. :)

I know what you mean about the slash being painfully obvious...

When we read this book for class my teacher spent a portion of every day explaining that they werent gay, it just looked that way hahahah.

I like the story, it was very well in character!

That was great! It was just like reading the book, the flow of the story and the words was perfect! They were very much in character, and it was just all around awesomeness. Gene/Phineas slash is awesome. 3

Oh, that was amazing. They were undeniably in character, and the style was exactly like the book. I felt as though I was reading a lost page from it, honestly.

And, sigh, if only your Author's Note was true. ;[

i liked it. it's cute, well-written, and though you occasionally misuse semicolons, very well done. i believe they're both in character enough (though it's rather hard to say; i haven't read the book in a few months). A Seperate Peace is one of my favorite books, and you've done a good job with this fanfic.

-tac

I loved this! It was awesome. It totally sounds like it came out of the novel! i couldn't even stop to breath. This flowed amazingly. I totally enjoyed reading this and i'm going to enjoy favoriting it and reading it again! Great Job!

This is really good! And oh, you're right about the obvious slash thing!

That was acctually pretty good, too bad it doesnt go on. And yes they were very much in character, I was impressed.

I read this book last year and loved it and this totally does it justice. They are very in character and the voice is consistent. I'm amazed at how well it fits in with the rest of the story and really enjoyed it. Great work!

Oh, Finny staying away from any life threatening trees is definitely reason enough to review!

I enjoyed the story A Separate Peace immensely

And your story was just as enjoyable. I adore Finny/Gene with all my heart. You certainly made a brilliant story; a wonderful read.

As far as you sticking to the original voice, I thought you did a really nice job with that.