You’re very talented. I’m sad about how this story ended but as the writer, that decision is entirely yours to make and hell maybe the point was for it to be sad. I really enjoyed what you did here and I’m glad I stuck around for the ride.

I only have 2 things I’d like to bring attention to that I think you may have missed when wrapping it up. First, kakashi is a ninjutsu specialist and I don’t see him taking tsunade on hand to hand and not using a single jutsu pretty much the entire fight. I feel like his death was strictly for the plot and not an accurate depiction of how that would play out.
Second, what happened to Itachi? He took his chance to leave the Akatsuki never to be heard from again?

Overall though, this is definitely worth the read and has a place on this site as a story that stands out. Well done.

... bro you know how to fuck someone completely over emotionally man jesus

oh yeah only took four to one to stop him tho

is this NaruTema? i know this is stupid to ask since there is tag Naruto U. and Temari but this story doesnt lead anywhere to their relationship

You ruined everything with akina could care less about her and she honestly sucks any fun out of this story I was having

LITTTY

I feel sorry for the author because his fanfic grew irrelevant due to the progression of canon naruto plot

"With the gate breached, it is only a matter of time before we leave our dead on the streets of the white city" funny, I could have sworn I've heard that before...'Le Gasp' that's from the end of the last Gandalf mission in the Lord of the Rings Return of the King video game. How interesting.

Unfortunately the end of that last chapter... I can't read anymore. This entire sub plot with Akina is just not fun to read. So for some reason akinas seal has a function that Narutos doesn't have...whatever, doesn't make any sense why the fourth would do that but well pretend that makes sense. the kyuubi can hop between seals... okay whatever well pretend that makes sense too.. 9 YEARS LATER and all he's done to mitigate the after effects of this problem is to basically condition his body a little. this just seems like you knew he was too powerful for what you wanted to do with the story and you are now bending everything to keep him weaker so that he doesn't seem overpowered.. him not telling them to bring Akina back with him was the final nail in the coffin. he could kill her, forcing the kyuubi back into his seal. then examine her seal and add its improvement to his own. he could have asked them to grab her, studied the seal and added the improvement to his own. in no way shape or form does what actually happened make any sense. you even mention that he has been looking for her for YEARS... I can just tell that you are going to continue bending the plot to keep Naruto on level... and then when you are ready to finish the story you are going to stop bending the plot and narutos either gonna die, commit suicide, or he's gonna be overpowered but it doesn't matter cause its the end... up until all this, the story was really good. but unfortunately I'm just not enjoying reading anymore. I hope other people enjoy it anyway. all though I don't like it I still applaude the amount of time it must have taken you to write all this out.

oh my god... I, I don't have words. you, you beautifully tragec monster. This work of art is so sad, but it is the most beautiful thing I've ever read.

This is good. Not quite my cup of tea but every time I start to lose interest you shift the characters focus just enough to make me wanna see what happens next

And this is just the beginning, dang.

this was single handedly the best ff I've ever read pat yourself on the back my friend. and thank you for creating this.

Man, this story is very much a product of its time. Edgy and depressing, like a teenage goth on drugs. I think I'll stop here because there are so many holes in this plot I would fill pages and pages of reviews to enumerate them. And what I've read from other reviews certainly isn't encouraging. Sad, because this is a great concept. Hopefully someone else will take it and make it justice.

Bloody hell. Again I sit here, absolutely stumped by the beauty that FanFiction can produce. I have little to say because no praise can ever possibly come close to being enough for a novel such as this. All I can say is thank you.

Oh and: What the heck happened to Sasuke