Should have added a bit where he lived with Semei and Soubi. It would have been a nice touch. Spice things up a bit. Add some flavour.

beautiful! Really enjoyed this fic, from start to the very end. this was sweet as a OC' s were well crafted throughout the fic, really loved Takara, her personality, and past. Masao was a nice asset to things. and how could I forget the servants!

The writing style wasn't the best, but it got better with every chapter. So applauds for learning.

Just fell in love how you portrayed Ritsu in here. You captured his personality quite well, gave reasons behind his meltdown, which I really liked the handling of. That was unexpected but fit right in the boil of emotions.
Speaking of emotions mine's piled up, when he wanted to sell Ritsuka back to the shop... That means this fic had good build up and great execution of the plot. Everything would make this 9/10 except for the ending...
The final chapters seemed rather rushed, and I would've liked to see Ritsu's life with Ritsuka now, what altered, or at least a little more emotion put into their reunion. Right now it seemed blank... So :
8/10

And damn you for making me fall in love with Ritsu!

i think the ending could be a bit more touching and longer...
could you please make a final, ultimate chapter of their union?

I love this story and your writing is very good too. I noticed you switch tenses in awkward places have some weird typos you might want someone to edit your work I can if you want...Anyway sorry for my grammar Nazism btw I love your take on Semei

How far along was Loveless when you wrote it like what vol

cause semeis kind of a sadist in the most recent :(

Loved it. D

Not an ending I was expecting, but it was good. You're a good writer. Keep writing, kay?

Aw!

What are you takin about? That was a beautiful ending. I can almost see Ritsu squeezing Ritsuka with those large arms of him, making the both utterly happy.

Ohh, that is so sweet. You were right, sensei. That is a very sweet couple. but I still like SoubixRitsuka

Kakki here! A very great finish! I really enjoyed this story, so thank you for the entertainment while it lasted. Now onto Life's Many Indulgences! Glad to see you've updated it.

Aww, this is the end? I wish there was more. I really liked this story.

I positively adore your story! Please please please write a sequal!

Wow, the end of it. Well, I guess Ritsuka is happy again. Wonderful chapter and wonderful story!

Brilliant! Love it! Love it! Love it! It's sad that the story ends. Could you possibly add another chapter to celebrate their reunion, like Ritsu and Ritsuka *you know what* and Ritsu being gentle to Ritsuka. Just a fangirl wish.. but otherwise I really enjoyed your story. Great!

GASP! You have completed the story! I would have loved to see more, but it's okay that it has ended here. Thank you for providing me with such a wonderful story to read.

So sorry to see this end - this was a great story!

It would have been nice to see more of the reunion between Ritsu and Ritsuka . . . _