Oh this was so beautiful! If only things had happened this way.

-Nyx

Aw.

I love Heroes. Or was that loved?

Regardless, this is a VERY purdy Nathan/Heidi Fic.

That the extra word "body" is in there towards the end, is rather gloomy. Like Heidi's dead? dying?

Or am I just being paranoid...

I think it would seem less "gloomily foreshadowing" if it was just "And he cradled her tightly as..."

Nice piece.

Critic

LOVE! It. Heidi was strong and Nathan finally showed a weak side!

I loved this, you have the characters down perfectly.

... There needs to be more Nathan/Heidi fic.

I thought this story captured Nathan's feelings about his ability and the accident.

Thumbs up. Very nicely done - captured great sense of characters and their traumas. They seemed very human - and have hope too. Great!

beautiful and just like nathan, simply sweet

This is an amazing story. It's so beautifully written, so passionate, so filled with insight & detail. I think it's the best Heroes story I've ever read. As I said, it's amazing. You've captured both Heidi & Nathan very well. I do take a little offense at Heidi's view of the GOP women, as I am a Republican woman myself. However, she's entitled to her pov.

Great story, great angst. But there's one more secret Nathan didn't tell Heidi- he's been working for the FBI.

this was absolutely amazing. just fantastic and a great characterization of both Nathan and Heidi.

I absolutely love this-

What perfection! Please write more. I'm going to recommend this to other Nathan fans.

That was awesome. Easily the best representation of Nathan I've seen in fanfic.