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Your use of the English language is clumsy. Is it because English is not your native language or is it just plain sloppy writing?

Whoo-weee you need to get a beta reader or something.

I know it has been a while since you wrote this story, but i hope you finish it. It is a different kind of potter story and i enjoyed reading it.

I just have two complaints. Grammar, and FINISH THE DAMN STORY PLEASE!

are you purposely spelling all these words wrong? Alley, Diagon, Gringotts and Malfoy

Apparate... and your grammar is terrible

you need to learn how to spell... bte its Avada Kedvra

This is a good story..I see it's been at least 3 years since last update..are you going to finnish it?

I'll add it to my story alerts just in case.

:))

Mrs. Weasley is so out of character! 90% of the time, she is referring to him as Mr. Potter. WTF? Also, get a beta.

i love your story, is very, has your personal stamp. I would love to take a final. Please upload the episodes. The interactions of Luna and harry is phenomenal.

very interesting and I love this cliffhanger please update soon

david

Harry! OH well, he's the main character, I'm sure he'll be fine! Update soon!

Oh Snap! I bet Luna's songbird will do something phoenixy and save the day(i hope).

Your story just gets better and better. though maybe make your chapters a bit longer so there arent so many of them. How many chapter you planning on writing because 31 is a lot and you dont seem even close to an ending.

ciao

Moonbeam2006