it was amazing reading this story. i really liked carmen and the way you potrayed her. good job.

From what i have noticed in this story, you might want to consider upping this story to a M rating. Especially with how steamy the snogging sessions are. I dont want to see your story get deleted. I have seen stories with less higher rated material get taken down. ANYWAY I love what you did with Lily's friends, by that I mean not just pairing off all of her friends to a Marauder like you did in Summer Rain. I also like how the story has all these secondary story lines that are actually interesting. In a LJ story I typically skip the first couple of chapters due to everything being kind of boring, but that was not the case here. I hope you update by, at the very least, the end of the summer!

The Marauders' Snake 333

WOW

This was amazing!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww soooo sweet!

My reason: (it's pathetic) I didn't really want admit this story was over so I said: I can't now. I'll do it tomorrow. Then, tomorrow. And tomorrow. And after that. And after that. And so on. *hangs head in shame(-WOW!)* I know. :(

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Awww. . .I can so imagine Summer's child. So adorable, so cute. Belle, that name totally fits.

Jonathon. He seems like a nice bloke. No Sirius, that's for sure, but a nice bloke nonetheless.

SIRIUS, YOU TEASE! Telling hormonal mothers that their "your favorite mummy-to-be" so they don't get all mad and hormonal around you. *le gasp*

"I threw my shoe in the toilet!" "Atta girl!" Nice, Sirius,congratulating kids on throwing shoes in the toilet. *facepalm*

Carmen . . . domestic? SOMEONE CALL THE AUTHORITIES! THE WORLD IS ENDING!

Two pregnant woman hugging? OH I'VE GOTTA SEE THIS.

Okay: James and Sirius are DAFT.

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Got to go for now! REVIEW LATER!

Yay for the last chapter! Not in a 'Yay it's over' way, but a 'yay it was such an awesome way to end it!' Lol

I really enjoyed it, from Sirius' humour to Belle being so bloody cute, from Carmen proposing to Kevin to James and Lily having their baby. And let's not forget Faith and Dean's little Hope :D And Remus. That amazing werewolf :)

It couldn't have ended any better. Amazing, simply amazing. Thank you for being such a talented writer and allowing me to experience this with you :)

Keep up the outstanding work! ;D

Best ending ever :) so adorable and Sirius was so funny. Great story. Sad its over but happy at the same time.

Aw! So cute! But NOO! It's the end :( but it was a great ending to a great story :) I loved it

Bloody Brilliant ending!

well i myslef kinda wanted to meet jonathon. like really wanted to meet him. and i suppose you couldve talked a little of the war but other than that it was fantastic

This is sad. It's my last review.. *Sigh* Here goes nothing.

Okay, I enjoyed it. Immensly. It made me sad though. All of them with kids. It feels that's the way my friends and I will be in a short time. Man that's a scary thought...

Anywho.. Brilliant! And I'll talk to you with your new story ;)

Hiya! I LOVED this chapter as well as the previous one so in total I give you 20 gold stars! This story was truly amazing, and I absolutely LOVED IT! I have added you to my favorite authors list! :) ) I can't wait to read your next story! I'm so happy I found this story. :) :) :))

a very nice ending.

You are an absolutely horrid person. Because of you, I stayed up until 11 to read all 26 chapters on a cellphone! Loll, I'm joking (about u being a horrid person). But really, the story is absolutely wonderful and you are a fantabulous writer. Thanks soo much :D