Well when I think of Kuno I think only of Tatewaki. I mean Kodaichi is only Kodaichi.

Its the way the anime referred to them I think.

Anyways I enjoyed Lost Innocence on an intellectual level. I hated the idea of Rape though.

I liked this piece too.l

Thanks,

John

pretty cool. I might have reviewed this one before but as you all know; Two is better than one.

Holy Cats. Sadly lovely and loveliness that's sad. Ouch. Poor Ranma. Thanks for sharing.

short but nice.

Wow, almost like that movie boys dont cry. Very good writing. Keep making great work

Chris read Lost Innocence and then youll get how it happened

its very very verry hard to believe that kuno could ever rape ranma...and very hard to believe he could devise a plan to rape her...ja ne

Wow, this was good...

Hate to say it but this basic precept has been done in another short fanfic.

But for the Storyline that this was Written for I would have to say that yoou did some pretty good context.

AAAHHH! Don't be sad, Ranma! Well, actually, his situation does warrant despair, so I guess it's appropriate. Still, how sad. Kind of reminds me of a scene in "Rejected" by Lord Archive, in which Ranma reflects on his situation after losing his mother and father on the bloody altar of honor (a term belonging to a different story that I can't remember). Thanks

That was a very moving piece. Unfortuneately, self image and worth take time to heal and recover...

Wow...very good...that's pretty much what Ranma's been thinking in my fic...suggestions or comments...with poem-like format that's hard to say...I liked the bit about it all feeling like a dream...how you started and ended with Ranma thinking about his father's opinions, and how you spent so much time on Akane...very good...the only one thing I can suggest is in the lines "She says I am honorable,/But I am without honor;" I'd suggest making it more along the same mold as the next pair of lines. Instead of just saying "I am without honor;" perhaps a short example would be given of why (s)he thinks that.