I love this. That dream bid with Roshi is probably my favorite dream sequence.

"DIE POOHBEAR!"

Krillin, if you'd pushed the button Vegeta woulda gone ape shit and he'd have a full day of wrecking the Earth before Goku came out of the Hyperbolic Tme Chamber. I'm not calling it your best moment but imagine if Cell and Vegeta had worked together to get ahold of Trunk's time machine? Things could have been much worse.

I like to think Chi Chi would be more loyal to Goku.

Hi. I'd like to know if you're going to be publishing a whole new story for your rewrite of this, or if you're just going to be editing this story. (I came across this story today, so I have no idea). also, it's been about a year or so since you were confirmed to be online (about 9 months). are you still here?

excellent work on this chapter! I enjoyed it. The previous chapter as well, I liked the battle between Vegeta and baby Trunks haha.

Okay, this was a great chapter and I like how you gave Krillin a more dramatic perspective of his life. But thing is, we all know in the DB universe, there are creatures from all walks of life living among the mass population, walking and talking as human beings, foxes, pigs, dinosaurs that wears farmer type clothing (referring to one of the episodes after perfect cell announced the cell games), and for God's sakes, a cat was the king of the western portion of the world (I think) lol, so I wouldn't see Krillin as being so insecure about his looks, but I do like what you've done with this story.

This is actually a great story! Too bad you're not updating more on it, I could read this for days

You think your fanfic would be bad? (it isn't) don't read my works then because you WILL get cancer.

nice update

take your time, look forward to any further output.

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another excellent read, cant wait for the next one!

Great work

Really good stuff , i can see this as an actual episode playing in my head . cant wait to read the rest

Pretty good
Bro