Love the different approach in your writing thanks for sharing

This is a gorgeous story and probably one of the best short, one shot ever and kyoharu portrayal. I found this story ages ago, but I never got around reviewing it until now. Sensual, sweet, and lovely scenes, personally becoming one of my all time favorites. Thank you and I hope you continue to write with this talent.

I love taking things written like this. Good job )

~Tori

What a lovely story!

Ebery couple needs tbeir alone time, and theg are no different. I like the battle aspect between them, so appropriate for them.

Gorgeous.

Every once in a while I find a story that I think of as "exemplary." This is one such story. You have a way, my dear, with words. So nice. Unrushed, IC and luscious. I've never heard the term Time-Turner before. I'm curious now. So...thanks for a great story and a new idea to consider. This should have gotten way more reviews than many other stories I've read re: KyoHaru, but one-shots never do stick around in the queue long enough, do they? Take care. Angelle

aww that was so beautiful

Oh, sweet lord good het smut! Overjoyed here. I just want to take this fic and roll in it and keep it for myself. :D

I loved it. I've read it nearly four times in the last few days.

I adored the time-turner style. Maybe I should try that in one of my stories...

Excellent job!

-Coriana

I like how you presented this story backwards. It's uncommon and interesting. Also, I like how it's short and sweet, though you still get a feel for both characters through their thought process. Great little read overall. :)

I like this unusual way of presenting a story, it seemed to flow and i love your wording, you were able to write about "it" with out sounding at all tacky or awkward.

Pretty well-written, and such an interesting style. l'd love to see more of this sort of material from you. Well-done!

wow, that's amazing how you wrote it, great job!

I liked this, I think the Kyouya-Haruhi pairing has a lot of potential