Would you ever consider picking this story back up?

I laughed out loud so many times that I had tears coming out. Mugen's nicknames for people, alone, was enough to crack me up. His rivalry with Jin was hilarious. This is so great. I'm pretty bummed out that it hasn't been updated in so long, because I'd love to read more. The only thing I'd say is to start a new paragraph when somebody new is speaking. Different speakers should never be in the same paragraph. I hope you come back to this someday, it was really entertaining!

like wats going to happen got to know have to tell us plz

I luv this mugen s so in character thank you

You should add in some elaborate vocabulary. :D Spice it right up, like grandmas flaming nose hairs lolz

Like I said, better and better. No complaints here. _

Hm. I'm trying to think of something you can improve on, cuz I know how that goes, reviews are like crack to me. hm... I'll read more and think on it.

They just keep getting better. :D I'm excited lolz.

lol... more nose hair jokes. yes, they're progressively better! :D

I liked te sniffing flowers to get my nose hairs from burning part. :D

You were, right, this chapter was pretty shakey. I see potential here, so I run forth to chapter two! :D

I bet you were just tressed or something. If you can't find inspiration, watch porn. You think I'm crazy, but it works! :D

Very fun and you make me a lot of laughed

I love this anime and I love this fanfic too much

i think you did a depicted mugen very well without it being too ooc. loveeee the work. wished you updated

UPDATE. D;

continue O_O i NEED to know what happens!

Oh my its been a whole year again. I just read all 10 chapters. I would lke to see you go on. please do