I loved the sweetness of this story. Thank you for writing it.

Ohhh... what about everyone's reactions? I suppose I shall never know... sigh...

This is charming. Thank you so much for sharing it, even if it's been a decade. :)

I loved this. It made my heart feel happy.

Good story of course

Okay, so this story is downright ADORABLE. I LOVE it. But I just wanted to point out that the style in the early 1900s was not in fact low-cut to show off cleavage, but high cut. You say several times "the wind on her back and neck" when I fact the wind would be covered by a thick layer of fabric.

Splendid ending to a wonderfully sweet story.

I loved this story very much. This is a sure favorite! Fantastic job!

Yippee! You introduce to me a character to hate! So many I already have...

But honestly, I enjoyed this chapter.

Marvelous descriptions. Your use of adjectives is perfect.

Great job!

Very nice first chapter. It was subtle; I like that very much.

I will continu reading this to my interest. :)

Beautiful! You wrote Mary and Dickon perfectly.

Yaaaaa this is sooo cute! I found mmysefl tearing up at the same time Mary did haha. And when Dickon confessed his love...oh~ I died and went to fanfic heaven.

Great story.

Nice

Dickon Mary blissful love. Well done!

That was absolutely lovely. Very well written. Absolute perfection.