waooww .. amazing story ... love the angst, passionate and how lovely the ending ... you've written kibb's perfectly ... thank you ... hope you'll write more about them ...

really enjoyed how complex both gibbs an kate made it..then when all said and done..made it simple really...well wrote.

Great story!

Wow! You wrote the angst so well..and omg...talk about the perfect ending!

Okay, I already love this story and I've only read the first chapter...I would love to read the original version too, if you wouldn't mind sending me the link?

IT was beatiful, it made me cry, it was hot. It was perfect.

This story is the perfect kind of angst...dramatic, passionate and a lovely happy ending! I loved this story...sorry I only reviewed on that last chapter, but in my defense you had me so enthralled I couldn't stop to review until I had finished the whole thing! Well done by the way, amazing story! I loved it and it totally fit them perfectly! :D

any plans of continuing the story

This was very good! You should be extremely proud it was an excellent story!

Please write some more KGIBBS soon!

Sweet ending. Really liked the hole story. Please write some more Kibbs.

Gosh, I don't know what your original for this chapter looked like - but this rewrite was SO moving! It's a pity you didn't keep a copy of the original you had, so you can post it (maybe as an alternative ending?) so we can check it out.

" “What, Tony?” " - Why is Gibbs calling DiNozzo by his first name? Is Gibbs going soft on everybody in his team now?

Well worth the wait, great job... and Aw so sweet, i love kate and gibbs.x.

Incredible sweet and so touching chapter-THANK YOU

Hey ya,

thanks for that brilliant piece of Kibbs. I loved reading it from the beginning. They way you started with some heavy Kibbs and turned it into a angsty piece was fabulous. Throughout the chapters you kept us readers always on the verge between losing hope the two of them can actually fix it and already seeing them crashed against some wall to succumb to the surpressed feelings. The way you solved it in the end with Gibbs doing the talking was so great. And getting the ladden chapter back to a lighter tone with DiNozzo calling was perfect. I think I might be off to read it again from chapter one. Thanks a lot, Ardin.

Cheers,

Mel

Oh wow, finally they clear things up! Fantastic chapter, grand ending to a grand story! Just lovely and VERY cute! Please write more KIBBS soon!

Big hug!

Nina