wow! What a beautiful story and nicely written romantic plot. The visuals were stunning and the characters were on point! It fits perfectly with the Zelda universe. I like how it was spontaneous but planned at the same time. The little banter and dialogue between Link and Zelda showed a lot of chemistry. I can see this happening at the end game when he finally gets the princess. :D

That dynamic of becoming a king to her queen... one of the best points for a hopeless romantic fanatic

I hope you write more stuff. :)

~Chameleon Eyes

Congratulations! you made Missionary position interesting for me, as I usually find it boring and overused in fanfics. Thought I wish the Lemon was longer, after all that build up.

Also I hoped you write a story soon, even though it's been 9 years since your last one.

*sigh* A man can hope can't he...

Kk

I really liked it

In my oh so humble opinion, this fic is flawless. I appreciate the characters personalities and simple light hearted story line. Great writing!

Truly a well written one-shot! Kudos to you!

This...felt absolutely right. Truly magnificent and romantic in the right amounts and so much more!

Very nice

Loved it!

WTF? OperationJohnny? Anyways, nice story. Kinky!

holy moly that was HOT! a very tastefully written lemon. Not too many of those out there. I loved this, you r great at writing romance. great job! )

GREAT JOB BEST STORY IVE FOUND!

I know that you posted this particular story a good while ago, but I just found it. I often read fanfiction, where i will find many errors, things from mispelled words to grammatical errors. I am pleased to say that you did a wonderful job in writing this story. You were very descriptive, and that is one of the best things that a writer can be. I could see myself at the party, in the castle... You should feel proud of yourself for being able to write as well as you do. And, being an immense fan of anything pertaing to Link, i can say that you did an amazing job of not butchering the story. If you have written many other stories, that you would like me to read and tell you what i think of them, i would be more than willing to oblige you. Add , to my above said name, and it is my email address. Again, Kudos.

I have to say this is one of the best lemons I've read, you seem to be able to express the idea, without making it really dirty. I also loved how the story began. PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER LEMON1