| Reviews for Him |
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   Kai's kitty chapter 1 . 4/22/2019 Oh I totally loved this. Thank you for sharing. |
| untouchable hexing witch chapter 1 . 9/27/2012 We loved this. I love how well you showed the chemistry :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/2/2012 loved absolutely loved it maybe write more like this |
| qwAEUI chapter 1 . 11/5/2011 I freakin' cried when i read this! Dear god, I feel so bad for Soi. Great job though. |
| the eyesore chapter 1 . 9/3/2011 Very nice portrayal of Bleach's reality, as painful as it is, it was great! Haa |
| Awake Phoenix chapter 1 . 6/17/2011 I wish I could portray Yoruichi, Urahara – their intrinsic intimacy and casual, carefree way of showing that – as well Suì-Fēng and her jealousy and recognition on this – in such a perfect way like you did in this one. UraYoru is a pairing that fascinates me, however, I don’t dare to mess with their personalities because I know better that I would ruin it. Unlike you. You captured them in a beautifully way. Thanks for sharing. |
| MastaDrumma22 chapter 1 . 9/2/2008 Nice. If only a follow up chapter. |
| Ihateverything chapter 1 . 8/9/2007 Man, that's got to hurt. I feel really bad for her, but I love the story . |
| Final Fight chapter 1 . 7/25/2007 Ouch... |
| Lesser Master chapter 1 . 7/20/2007 Okay, get back here and continue making chapters! That was great first chapter and I didn't see a completed. You have a great start, so don't let it go. Keep going with it! |
| Ophelion chapter 1 . 6/5/2007 Wow! I like how you inflicted the tension upon a seemingly-casual piece right at the end! It makes it all the deeper! Urahara and Yoruichi's conversation was so in-character, too. And I like how you made Urahara call Yoruichi "Yoru". It just adds that much to the little something between them. Soi Fong was righteously in-character, as well. And I adore your ending. Damn you always have such profound closing lines! Thanks for the brillaint read! |
| spedclass chapter 1 . 4/14/2007 Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon! |
| thetemptedangel chapter 1 . 3/27/2007 I love that story! Wow, I have to go check out the rest of your stuff |
| Shikabane-Mai chapter 1 . 3/22/2007 That was... sad. Poor, poor Soi Fong |
| Alaena Night chapter 1 . 3/9/2007 Ooh, nice! I really like Yoruichi and Urahara, and I love how you portrayed Soi Fong. So true to her character! This was a wonderful read, very IC for all characters involved, and I loved getting to see a peek of what things might have been like before the manga's start. This would have to be my favorite line in the story: - elegant ways of being totally inelegant at the table For some reason, it's perfect. Contradictory but so true! Keep up the awesome writing! -Alaena |
