OH MAN... I am SO glad to see you back to finish this wild ride. This was one of the first fanfiction and first Mako/Ami fics I ever read many moons ago back in 08-09.

I have been a M/A shipper since the early DiC animation days, but finding this fic, back when I started reading fanfiction, as well as several others really solidified my love for the couple. So this fic has a warm place in my heart.

It's been a while since I read much fanfiction. And an even longer while since I've read anything on this site since I've mostly moved on to AO3 however, the other day I decided to check back in for old times sake and boy am I glad I did.

I've since went back and reread the entire fic and I still love it and look forward to your continuation.

Lovely

I really enjoyed your story. The story is very entertaining, very original. This is the first time I read something with different dimensions. It is a very well developed plot. I hope I can read the rest of the story someday.

So It's been nearly 2 years since your last bio update, and I've just finished 29 chapters of a super duper crazily awesome story!
I really hope that you can complete the story 1 day lol
Thanks for all the hard work! Your fic is precious!

Uhmmm... Is it too much to ask you to continue with this? It was so interesting that I was sleepless for two days reading this... Please? I'd be left wondering how this goes for the rest of my life! (okay, that's an exaggeration). But I really wish you still continue this.

I love it... Please go on !

This is a very sweet and interesting story, I'm just sorry I'm not very familiar with Sailor Moon, but I absolutely enjoyed this fic so far and would love to continue to read the rest. You have perfect prose, and a good writing style that keeps you reading with each chapter. I love the characters inner thoughts, because you do it in a way that brings them to life. :D Keep going!

Okay, this fic is even more awesome than I remember it being the first time I read it. I know it's been a couple of years, but please come back to it one day! :'). The suspense is killing me!

Only after a few chapters in that I noticed you hadn't updated in over two year. Too bad then, I was quite hooked.

This is a very interesting premise. I've only just gone through a few stories in this genre recently, and I have to say that yours is so far the best-written, well thought-out, adventure-ridden one. And I really do like it.

Best-written: You're not overly descriptive about looks, though there are minor cases of what the colour eyes and hair a certain character being repeated (good because it's a fanfic so readers typically know characters' looks anyway, so less writing space wasted; on the other hand, I've noted that the using of "'this colour'-eyed person says", "'that colour'-haired person says", seems quite common. Wonder if that's the way it goes here?). Grammar is good, some spelling mistakes (I actually thought Artemis was really Artermus in your story earlier on; Ami-Amy at some points). Your change in point of views was quite smooth; eg the change of Ami to her true form of Amy, I thought was a smooth transition. Action scenes were good, emotional scenes were good, and overall quite believable in this fantasy context.

Well thought-out: You pretty much convey in your chapters that you know where you're going; something leads to something, not just forgotten. Whether you're babbling out random physics theories or actually fitting some plausible ones in the context of this story (I wouldn't know), I don't care; I like the thought in it all the same. Attributing rapid healing and prosopagnosia was ingenius to making a realistic solution to how the characters run rampant with their identities for the world to see, yet no one recognises them (as in the original fictional work). Generally seems to match with the people and events of the original, though whether they are based of the manga or the anime I can't tell or remember - Rei seems to be more manga-like with a cooler composure, Makoto-manga with that fear of flying (absolute gold, by the way), while Usagi more anime-like with the childish actions, Mamoru-anime with the rose, as far as I can remember. Also, I didn't think Hotaru was that much younger than the rest, was she? 14 to their 29? Anyway, love that you used the English-version names for the doppelgangers (rather than the same or random made-up ones), and the nod to cyborg Mercury.

Something I noted:
You mention several times about Setsuna being omnipotent, but I think you probably really meant omniscient, as you relate this 'omnipotence' to her knowledge of the times.
I kind of forgot now, so ignore if this is wrong. Amy's left hand is cybernetic, right? So when Ami broke hers, doppelganger Hotaru shouldn't think of healing it while still thinking Ami is Amy because her healing wouldn't work on a cybernetic limb?

Adventure-ridden:
As it says, there's real adventure, real Big Bad, real other dimension, real fights. Compared to the few I've read, this is not taking the names and characteristics of popular characters and inserting them into a random drama/storyline (be it good or bad). I don't know which is actually the norm, since I haven't read fanfics in years, and this is actually just a random nostalgic action. Either way, this is what I expected, so a big plus in this review.
Humour was not lacking either.

Okay, well, this is long enough. If you ever decide to return to continuing this, know that at least one reader (obviously more by the number of your reviews) thought this was very good work. Hopefully you may update while I'm still in this random phase and will read your next chapter, but if not, good luck (in the next chapters, and your next stories).

damn such a good story to bad its not finished. if you ever get this message neuroleptic i hope that one day you might finish this fic

Update it damnit! DX

it was a really long time since u updates this...

. . . The fact that Mamoru was left to be taken, was that a part of Setsuna's plan of destiny or something? . . . Wait. . . Why don't Artemis and Luna change and help fight?

*laughs* Ami, you rock! And, as usual, the Outer Senshi are left out for the REAL fighting, just like in the anime. ; For once in this story, you've got me glaring at Haruka. Hard. Real hard.

*sniff* Wow. That ending. . . it's got potential. XD

. . . Oh my God.

Whoa, while this chapter wasn't as sad ((I know, you're thinkin' I'm crazy XD)), I think the future chapters hold hope because of what Ami brought up. At least they've got more chances, and with the past beating of Beryl, well, they can do it again. XD