| Reviews for Unwise |
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   librastar chapter 1 . 12/15/2013 Out of all the RenRuki fics, yours definitely has the most lyrical and beautiful prose. Sensuous, vivid imagery and spot on characterisation. The ending (which I read as IchiRuki), alas was heartbreaking but still a beautiful, bittersweet conclusion. Well done! |
| Athar-Luna chapter 1 . 1/17/2011 Heartbreakingly beautiful...The images that come to mind while reading is like a painting and how you captured Renji is so true. Thank you so much for uploading this and I'm so glad I found this :) |
| Eikinskjaldi chapter 1 . 11/20/2008 I love the imagery in this story, it flowed so beautifully. And Renji is love. |
| Creeper J chapter 1 . 7/18/2008 pretty good. u should write some more fics about them. |
| jenny-R chapter 1 . 5/28/2008 That was really sweet. I especially liked how you managed to adapt your style to Renji's way of thinking and acting. You are a brilliant author. Great job, once more! |
| KuronoMizu chapter 1 . 4/14/2008 Oh wow...I'm at a loss for words right now, but that was just so...poetic and real and touching and FANTASTIC! And your writing style is wonderful, you got all the important points across in such a fluid and artful way... And you captured Renji's POV quite well... and that's all I can manage rof now, because my capacity for normal speech (well, writing) seems to have floated away like the hair tie. XD So I'm faving this, and not just 'cause I'm a sucker for RenRuki-it's because this is excellent! |
| valcr1st chapter 1 . 4/10/2008 this is a funny line: "She tasted like... like... shit," but then realized it's closely followed by "he was bad at metaphors.." haha. :D |
| Amaterasu-chan chapter 1 . 4/5/2008 Fantastic! And I'm not saying it only because I love RenRuki so- if anything, it makes me even more critical when reading s tory dedicated to them :D. Lovely! |
| Adelaide MacGregor chapter 1 . 1/27/2008 Good job, well done. |
| MangKulas chapter 1 . 8/30/2007 you painted a sensual scene, without being pornographic...nice... made my heart flutter, too... |
| revenge and rebirth chapter 1 . 8/4/2007 I loved this so much I can't even explain. It's so like Renji to blame the river. [: LOVE. That episode (flashback in South Rukon) is my faavorite underline underline. |
| shogi chapter 1 . 6/30/2007 Sigh... that was bittersweet... and I loved it. I take it Rukia went to Ichigo? Not with Renji? Hm, well done... I feel all sad now... |
| cat chapter 1 . 6/2/2007 so beautiful! you really captured Renji's character in a sweet and sad little story |
| demoneyeskyo86 chapter 1 . 5/23/2007 wow...just wow. i don't really know what else to say. it's perfect. i love it so much! wonderful job! |
| CWolf2 chapter 1 . 5/6/2007 This is wonderfully writen, and you've done a great job portraying Renji's character too. Again, this was great, I really enjoyed it. |
