yo! :)) revieeeew time xD

VrtraHex-sama... I really really like your work... :) especially now that I'm always looking for this pair ( xD something bout these two that clicks for me :bd )
weeelll... I may be in no standing to criticize your work.. but as a reader, I really had fun with this story.. :D
hmm... though... I admit.. I mostly only read the flashback parts.. ( . x) soorry... I'm only more interested in how the pairing met and their story... but really.. I mean REALLY... the flashbacks didn't dissapoint.. _ ) \m/
I hope you continue this story.. _ or... if you are gonna rewrite this.. please don't stray too far from the sweetness of this story.. :))
your portrayal of tayuya in this story is really spot on for me.. xDD
the couple's antics were really fit for the two and I honestly would want more background about them? i guess? xD
all in all... please... pleaaase continue your work... :))))
and.. I hope your up-to-date with the manga.. ;) ( i know you are... xD )
if you could please put some elements of the manga too.. it would be really nice... so pleaaase... . purdy please.. xD

THANK YOU for your harwork and can't wait for the upcoming chapters! :))

i love this story this is a great read

Continue the story. Give me beta powers. This story rocks! Please keep going.

Suna No Ken

Interesting story, it's always nice when someone does interesting parinings, and I'm an unashamed Naru/Tayu shipper. Awesome story, has a good framing device, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

There had better be more. I wanna see how they get together. You have definitly earned an avid reader to this fic.

I say don't reboot the fic, with Tayuya around it's going to be very AU anyway.

Naruto and Tayuya certainly suffered a non-standard KO, lol.

I like the story the way it is. Something different. I think it would take away from the story if you started just spouting off manga times. Make your own for us to enjoy. Thanks for your work and can't wait to read more.

I would be happy to beta for you, but I'm working a full time job, so bounce backs might be around three days to a week. If you can handle that I would love to be given the opportunity.

Nice chapter and kinda surprised that Sasuke was the one to save Jiraya from dieing in this story.

Your story's doing well enough as far as fitting with the current chapter. I wouldn't mind a link in your profile or something for a pic of Tayuya with the changed look as in some blue in her hair. Hard to know the look you're describing since there isn't one for us to see for reference

Yes you should this is a very good story because theirs very few good naru/tayu that are good like this one.

Wow, that's an interesting way for Hinata to get around her shyness.

There are alot of interesting little idea's in this story and I hope you return to writing again one day.

continue soon. good story.

Good...but where is chapter 6?

ur a great writer