Reviews for When it Becomes Too Much
Guest chapter 40 . 6/11/2019
This is a great work. One of the best things I've ever read. There are so many wonderful insights and the characterisation is amazing. Plus, the controversial ending is actually creative and emotional.
Beautiful work, kudos!
foxyxjack chapter 41 . 5/22/2018
One of my favorite Jate stories. It's just so emotional,hot and perfect. Thank you for writing this story.
DimpleCurlAeternaGirl chapter 6 . 12/18/2017
Love that Jack made T.J.'s dream come true!
DimpleCurlAeternaGirl chapter 2 . 12/18/2017
I'm glad Jack wants to be more involved.

Wow - Christian is a sleaze bag. Well, we already knew he was a cheater ...
DimpleCurlAeternaGirl chapter 1 . 12/18/2017
Great first chapter! I'm already booked by the way you began the story, setting and what's going on with each Jack and Kate. Feeling sad for Kate's boy and situation!
Guest chapter 41 . 7/4/2017
Masterpiece! Jack&Kate forever
Guest chapter 35 . 6/18/2017
What the Fuck is going on ?! Are you serious Jack ?
Guest chapter 33 . 6/17/2017
I wonder when will Kate stop keeping secrets from Jack
Guest chapter 32 . 6/17/2017
Omg they are so happy and it makes me so happy Conner is such a baby boy and Jex was so hot ,I need Jack in my life
Guest chapter 28 . 6/17/2017
I wanna kill that Brandi person
Guest chapter 24 . 6/17/2017
Your Jex scenes are killing me, great chapter
Guest chapter 23 . 6/16/2017
Kate is acting stupid sometimes ,she ruined Jack's surprise for her.I understand she just lost her child but All jack wanted is make her happy
Guest chapter 20 . 6/16/2017
Omg Conner and Kate are sooo good together ! I can imagine Conner as mini version of Jack ! He is such a sweetheart
Guest chapter 16 . 6/16/2017
JEX WA E
Guest chapter 11 . 6/15/2017
"Um,I'm exercising"
-"Can I come in and watch ?" Omg I'm laughing so hard Conner almost saw them having sex lmao
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