okay, i liked this. searched forever for something without sap. really not sure why the majority of people writing Drarry feel the need to coat every possible action in layers of romantic thought and ickiness.

but this. what little mention of love there was was hidden with big words and excellent grammar. no need for pathetic declarations of undying love or whatnot. a vast improvement on almost everything else i've managed to locate recently.

so yeah. this is just me saying well done. the unromantic nature within me congratulates you.

hm...im okay with the ending... well... quite satisfied with it although i dont really like draco being whore and poor harry...but i like the way it end _ is there sequel for this?

Oh, love this!

From Me x

Cute! )

"Great, Harry thought as he followed. Apparently learning “Girl” wasn’t enough; now I’ve got to learn to speak “Draco.”"

that has got the be the best line ever. I love this story.

This tale, despite my personal hatred of slash, was well written enough that I could enjoy it for what it was worth, a well sculpted story. True, the beginning, especially the bathroom scene with Draco and Zambini, screamed pre-teen soap opera, the following chapters matured as Harry's own emotions matured. Though I must admit that at times I found it hard to believe that Harry and Draco wouldn't be more conflicted, or at least Harry would be, considering their past, how this author pulls in some outside factors, such as Harry's own troubled emotional past, brought the two together. Of course, in pure Draco fashion, he dragged Harry by the nose the entire way till forced to meet it face to face. If this is merely a taste of this author's potential, I just might have to read more, in spite of myself.

GREAT story, I was almost worried at the end. I'm glad that Ron and the gang stuck with Harry.

Why did he have to try so hard with Draco? Draco should have made some appologies also. The things he said in the Slytherin common room,about how much sex he had with Cormac and Blaise and how Harry never had him. Why didn't Draco have to crawl a little?

I actually rather liked this ending. It's very suiting for the tale. It wraps up everything that needs to be, but leaves panty open for interpretation, which I always like. Ron and Blaise are fantastic in this chapter, by the way.

I love this. Please update soon. Don't leave us hanging!

I like the little overview at the beginning, it helps to get the reader's attention. Excited to read more!

GREAT story!

Cormac's a total creep, eh?

It's not over, is it?

Hm, well, I hope not... quiero mas!

Good job!

]

"Except for Ginny Weasley. Now there’s a girl who gets around more than the bloody Knight Bus.”

HAH, that just cracked me up.

Great story!

]

Great first chapter!

I'm super interested already.

Good job!

]

He got his answer?