Wow!...Well...you know what you managed to do? Get me pissed. Lol jk.

Aw. Omg. Dude you have to show me viewers the song. SO they can have more visual effect. And also BECAUSE PEOPLE WANT TO HEAR THE SONG!

Yeah! I like it! X3

plz write more and soon :) i look forward to ur next chapters :D

well i lik it so far hope yah update again soon oh btw what was the name of the song?

i love this could you please write more of this

love the story...it was a good start...plz updata soon

awesome story so far. hope u update soon D

O-OI cant belive someone would actually make a profile for everyone... O_O HINATA'S VOILENT!

you know, this story has a lot of potential with an interesting idea, but:

1. I recommend you do the story in regular paragraph format instead of script format. Also, it is against the rules (read guidelines under entries not allowed).

2. Instead of doing profiles, make a prologue and describe the characters. this will make it a lot more interesting instead of just listing information.

3. Your grammer is off a bit, especially sentence structure. You may want to think about getting a beta reader. They're easy to find, and they tell you things so your story can be the best it can be!

I hope this helps, and update soon!

cont plz

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I'm reviewer number 5! So get un-lazy! Continue this good story. And whta does dancin' have to do with ninjas?

intersting...hope u continues soon..

-FoxBlood

That was did naruto meet everyone?How old is everyone in this chap?I'm glad that naruto isn't alone but I wonder y she hasn't started training soon pleaze.

I think you have too many characters. First of all, your descriptions are vague. Second of all, you don't delve deeply into the characters when you wrote the profiles. I can't believe you left out favorite food and favorite color. Surprisingly, these can tell the reader a bit about about the character.