She tried to kill you and did it proudly so KILL HER

Pride : Someone call ma name?

Betenowaru: NOT YOUUUUUUU *throws chair at pride*

You’re really good at this. I’m in love with your writing. This is great.

Haha, I love the idea of Ed being the kid brother.

Okay I don't know how many times I've read this already. I just love so much how you portray all of their relationships, my gosh this is an amazing fic!

Really great story and well-written! Loved it!

Ed almost died becuase if a plastic bag smothering him...
DESTROY THEM ALL.
(JK...)

I think this story is great. It shows how much roy cares for ed, and it shows how much ed trusts roy. Ed trusts roy to open, express his feelings.

THIS WAS SO CUTE! OH MY GOD, THE FEELS ARE KILLING ME! :D :D :D

I absolutely adored that! It was amazing! I wish I could say more, but the thoughts are jumping around my head and I can't catch one! I can't focus and it hurts me ;)
I'll give it a try though

I loved how you wrote the emotions for all the characters and especially loved the relationships between the characters, it had to be my favorite part, seeing the different relationships. I like when people focus on on the relations other than Ed and Al too by the way. Because while every relationship can be expanded on, we know so much about their relationship already, so it's fun to hear about the others every once in a while :)

Now that I've used my random thoughts and compressed them into a ramble your life is sure to be better off ;) you are welcome!
*sarcasm was heavily used to write that*

Thank you for writing :)

Love everyone's relationship in this story. I like how you interpret the whole team as brothers C:

Was so scared for Ed D: I was twitching as I read that part lol xD

My name is Evelyn too! And you spell it the same way! Sorry, I just saw Mage in your name, and I thought of the mages in fire emblem awakening. I am currently playing that game. It's fricken awesome, int's on the 3 d.s. You have been awesomepersoned. (Sorry for the really long review! Nice story!)

lol. that was pretty depressing and i cried when ed was asking if he was a bad person, but i was definitely laughing at the end. great story.

This story was fantastic! It had a lot of angst mixed with suspense, but it had an ending filled with fluff that made me smile. It was beautifully written. I loved it!

icedragon

Aweee Ed scared... It was so cute though, the way him and Roy talked.
I LOVE THIS FIC!

Excellent fic, wonderful interaction between Ed and Roy. Thank you!