Reviews for Heartbroken
kai1994 chapter 5 . 6/10/2008
Im definitly not a Victoria fan but i did feel little bit sad for her.

But on the other side how awesome was that when Trish came all the way to florida for Mickie?

I think Trish and Mickie are a way better couple then Mickie and Victoria.

Amazing chapter!

GO Mickie and Trish!
BlackBlackHeaven chapter 6 . 11/6/2007
I've been a busy gal and haven't be able to review. But I have finally found sometime to. I gotta say this ending was swell, I liked it a lot. I'm happy that they got together! Even after the werid Mickie/Trish thing. I loved the story you did a fab job on it.
WhereIvegone chapter 6 . 10/27/2007
You FINALLY updated lol... great last chapter BUT lol... yes there is a but... now I feel kinda bad for Trish... I mean... aww poor Trish... she made one mistake and got like totally screwed over in the end... lol but apart from that great chapter
Takerslady chapter 6 . 10/26/2007
Nice ending, I hate the way she just played Victoria though.
Odyssey's Burner chapter 6 . 10/26/2007
I liked this story and it inspired me to write a femslash (or at least have femslashed characters)

Good as always.

...*thinks for a second...* Wait, did you INCLUDE the scene where Mickie slept with Trish?
WhereIvegone chapter 5 . 5/2/2007
Awesome chapter... it was sexy ;- but now i feel bad for Victoria... she's my favourite :-D
Takerslady chapter 5 . 5/1/2007
That whore! She slept with Victoria and then turned around and slept with Trish, she acting like a slut. Poor Victoria.
BlackBlackHeaven chapter 5 . 5/1/2007
:O ...

*shock wears off* wow that was...that was HORRIBLE! HOW DARE YE! lol HOW DARE YE MICKIE DO THAT! The chapter itself however was great! :D It was! It was awesome...snail awesome! Just Mickie made me mad! AND Trish! HOW DARE YE! I'll be saying that all damned day now. Great chapter...sadly though if there is no conflict there is no story! :( which means someones gotta get all hurt! But it was awesome! :D IT WAS! IM NOT LYING AND IF I WAS I WOULD...Most Likely murder the towns people! :O Nah...I'm to lazy to do that. But yes it was great! And I'm repeating myself...so I should stop. But great chapter!...

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HOW DARE YE!
BlackBlackHeaven chapter 4 . 4/29/2007
wOOt! I have nothing cool to say today sadly! Although I liked this chapter it was great! I tried that drunk thing...it truly didnt work out for me lol plus it was a dare and all I wrote about was car insurance...odd really. BUT! I liked this chapter I don't know why but I think its just cause I adore conflict between people it makes my life more interesting! :D I also adore cheap plugs...I will need to send out a few more of my own cheap plus! ;P lol anyhoo enough of this never ending jabber
WhereIvegone chapter 4 . 4/28/2007
Hey... thanx for all the reviews on my stories anyway... great chapter... I feel so bad for Victoria though :-/

Maybe I'll try writing a chapter while drunk one day :-P
Takerslady chapter 4 . 4/28/2007
Victoria said she Mickie was rushing her? That's crqazy, they had sex the night before, that's about as rushed as you're going to get. Good chapter, update soon. :)
Odyssey's Burner chapter 3 . 4/27/2007
Beautiful, that was beautiful. Your detail was...likeable heh heh.
WhereIvegone chapter 3 . 4/24/2007
aw... poor Victoria... that's heartbreaking... yet still sexy :-/ great chapter
Takerslady chapter 3 . 4/18/2007
OMG! Poor Victoria, I can't believe Mickie said Trish's name, but then again she was drunk. Great chapter, very hot, update soon. :)
BlackBlackHeaven chapter 3 . 4/18/2007
wOOt you updated! :D That was one awesome chapter! and yes poor Victoria. damn the Trish! lol But I am happy that this story is going to be longer then you thought! it makes me go all giddy inside...uh never mind! lol I typed that out all wrong! OR DID I! :O lol sorry sorry, I'm supposed to be reviewing. Anyhoo great freaking chapter! :D
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