Reviews for What One May Never See
Guest chapter 2 . 3/1
this is funny
Emily chapter 1 . 11/28/2019
Hey I know this is an old story and you probably won’t read this but although I’m really enjoying it so far I do hope that you do not see “gay” as an insult as this can be very offensive and assuming that people who are ambiguous in looks and clothes choices are not automatically “gay”. I do hope you edit this otherwise great story. It’s 2019 no need for the use of gay and fag as insults.
Itachi008 chapter 11 . 12/1/2017
The pregnancy assumption and the phone call in this chapter are pure hilarity! :D
Meep chapter 31 . 10/31/2017
*sobs*
Elfkinsmut chapter 8 . 10/11/2017
I love this! So adorable!
Itachi008 chapter 4 . 10/6/2017
Poor Annora... I hope she'll find a way home.
Hahahahahahaha! This fic has great humour! :D
Itachi008 chapter 3 . 10/6/2017
Annora is absolutely NOT a Mary Sue! She's a GREAT character and, if it weren't for the fact that this is clearly a fanfic, I never would have guessed that Annora isn't an inexperienced newbie from canon.
The term 'Mary Sue/Gary Stu' is bullshit anyway. It doesn't mean anything and is just used to insult fanfic characters instead of the insulters having the common sense to offer REAL criticism.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/30/2017
Where the fuck did you find a movie about the Hobbit?
Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2017
Ed you just called yourself a girl...
Guest chapter 2 . 9/30/2017
You are officially screwed, my dear OC...

Fullmetal Alchemist reading Fullmetal alchemist in the world of Fullmetal Alchemist.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2017
Oh God. Envy-KUN?
VoldieandtheDeathMunchers chapter 1 . 8/5/2017
I had this in my favourites from ages ago and thought I'd give it a re-read, but yikes that homophobia tho. I realise this was written almost a decade ago, but I'm afraid that homophobic slurs are just such a turn off.
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2017
so was the blatant homophobia really needed?
anne choi chapter 1 . 1/16/2017
fics like these really don't age well lol
using "gay" as an insult.. come on
Siera-Knightwalker chapter 7 . 11/12/2016
I'm almost choking myself with laughter. And shedoes know that she's probably in a weird AU?
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