Certainly very well written. Great alternate story, with gripping twists and a satisfying climax, good job

Wow.

So, so well written. It was like a fairy tale, you know.

The ending was so sweet, very unexpected to me.

I was amazed that the Sayans had some kind of CSI (you know,

finding human cells under the guard's nails lol).

I felt sorry that Videl couldn't take Trunks with her... ;~~

Thanks for posting your stories up, you're really talented.

I hope you don't give up writing.

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Love the happy ending.

It was an amazing reading. Thank you for sharing your talent with us

Yes, in my dreams a kiss like that would lead to more too ;)

This chapter was awesome! Lovely and cute (and as always well-written)

I actually laughed out loud at this: "No wonder Goku confused food with marriage. Her food equals love." LOL :D

This chapter was awesome! I love it very much

WOW I like the plot, very original and refreshing ;)

This story was AMAZING!

Loved it

oh my God, this was so amazing, I actually cried ;_;

this story was really just... just, amazing. You could almost feel the emotion, you know?

too bad you're not making that sequel though, it would've been great it seems but, my opinion might be just *slightly* biased, seeing as I'm a fan of Trunks/Pan

Your story is really good, I enjoyed reading it! Videl's letter to Trunks made me cry, and I NEVER cry! I loved your story. And I hope you'll update on Sinful!

AH! I love this story! It's probably one of the best Dragonball Z Videl&Gohan one's out there. Thanks for writing. I kinda got teary eyed when reading Videl's letter to Trunks haha .

It'd be pretty awesome if you made a sequel :]

i dont get it ... why did she kill them?

so videl and vegeta have sex every night and videl has never gotten pregnant once?

Nice story. Love for there to be a sequel.