Reviews for Semper Fidelis
alterra23 chapter 7 . 9/9/2012
You had said that ryan was a pilot therefore it is impossible for him to be a sergeant which is an enlisted rank. In the united states military only officers are allowed to be pilots. The lieutenant rank is one of the lower ranks of officer in the United States MIltary
tcsportsmed7 chapter 8 . 1/20/2010
This was a very sweet story! Thanks for this. D
Ninpinpin chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
I love it!
othgirl2010 chapter 8 . 4/18/2008
hey update soon.
kursk chapter 8 . 6/18/2007
Fantastic fic, I loved how everything moved along and the ending was great.

Write more soon.
marcopolo8170 chapter 8 . 6/13/2007
I loved this fic. I with that you would do a sequel about thier wedding and married life. Can't wait for another fic written by you.
CohenNAtwood chapter 8 . 6/11/2007
Oh my I'm really sad to see this story go. It was definitely one of my favorites. Great ending... I loved reading every bit of it nice work and I look forward to reading your other stories as well.
brandyurastar chapter 8 . 6/11/2007
so i just found this story, and i got to read it fully through, and im so glad i did! it was awesome, such a good story, i loved everything about it. great job, i hope to read more from u again!
gorgeous moi chapter 8 . 6/10/2007
i loved it! thanks for such a great story. i really enjoyed reading it.
RJMoonspell4 chapter 8 . 6/10/2007
Nice ending...

I thought you would have focus a bit after the gala
ocgirl.fr chapter 8 . 6/10/2007
um... *glaring* you do know that I hate you, right? Like seriously wants to kill you!

HOW COULD YOU END THIS AMAZING STORY ? (are you high ?)

Seriously, everytime I saw an update, it made my day (like today, knowing that tomorrow i've this big exam)...

So please do something, anything but continue to write, update the S/M story, and create new stories duh! ! *sighs*

It was a pleasure to read this story, which i'll certainly reread in like 20 days lol...

OCgirl who i really sad :(
thekiller00 chapter 8 . 6/10/2007
That was a great ending !
thekiller00 chapter 7 . 6/2/2007
WOW ! Those were great posts ! I can't wait to see what happens next ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP ! POST AGAIN ASAP !
ryanfan chapter 7 . 5/28/2007
TO GODD ... very well written and thot of chapter .. update as sson as you can ...
ocgirl.fr chapter 7 . 5/28/2007
*sigh with contentment*

Are you gonna believe me if i told you you made my day (which was pretty shitty!)

I totally loved how Ryan, although returning to the Marines scares the shit out of him, wants to help his collegues; but Marissa is, lets say it, being pretty selfish, because she doesn't want to lose Ryan. Big error here... Ryan isn't going to respond to her little trantum. So... big break up ... and mean things were said (kinda disturbing the prostitute!ryan).

I kinda disappointed that Ryan didn't leave to help his mates, and that Marissa gets a second chance so easily.

Still, can't wait for you to update... PLEASE, you HAVE to update soon...! (don't forget your other story by the way *innoncent grin*)
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