Very well done. Fine job in relating how Jack was feeling.

sad

Dark, depressing. It really makes you think about how close they are, all of them. Saddening, but good. Thanks again.

Leuthy

Sad but nice job.

That was so sad. I ended up in tears. Wonderful and poetic.

Incredibly sad but well written. The silence of the SGC and the deadness in Jack are explained wonderfully. Good job.

You made me cry *again*. Really beautifully done. You got an incredible amount of emotion with an economy of words and phrases, which is really one of the toughest things to do. So many stories are overwritten in order to get the emotional point across, and this one was just perfect. Thanks for sharing!

Wow, this is ... an awesome story! Wow!

Horus

what a good story. i like it. are you going to continue it?

*Frowns and rubs her eyes a bit* Think I got something in my eye...

Anyway...this was really good. All his pain..watching as two others died, him killing one...

I don't blame him though for hiding...and letting the darkness embrace him, take him in and away from all the pain in the world. I really feel aweful for him. You have great descriptions for your stories.

I LOVE SG1, but the times are so off it seems like I can never see more than one eppy a month. It's really annoying. Anywho, I loved this like a duck likes water.

I cried

The first deathfic I read said had no point to it at all. I hated it so much that I avoided deathfics from then on. I'm glad I stumbled across yours though - it was the opposite. And so true. Thanks for sharing.

Simply beautiful

I love a dark story and this is a really good one!