I dunno I see Chakotay as the speaker and Janeway and a person she has meet on earth as the ppl hes talking about. Truley this story could be about mayone tho :D Nice writing :D

aww, that was interesting, hmm if its seven it means that its chakotay and janeway, but it sounds more like its janeway talking bout chakotay and seven (but oh those crazy c/jers out there wouldnt like it that way!) but really it could be anybody, an unknown ensign or something. very interesting, wait! or that person could b talking bout Me and somebody else, haha...

I'd guess Janeway (watching Chakotay and who can blame her?) and all I can think is that they should have ended up together! So sad - poignant. And if you do have to eat 'your' zat gun, can I watch? :o)

My personal opinion is that Janeway is speaking about Chakotay and Seven, but it's also possible that Seven could be speaking about Chakotay and Janeway. Who is the speaker? Don't keep me in suspense!

Very good story. Very sad too.

Well as I'm an Janeway fan and I want to see her happy I like to image the narratot as Mark who watches Janeway and Chakotay. Just a thought but I would really like to know who you had in mind while writing this.

Well, the characters are definitly NOT Janeway and Chakotay. Hmmm, maybe Harry watching Seven and the doctor...Anyways, good story. It was fun to read (even if it was a little...depressing...)and I found myself trying to imagine who the characters were. (but they are not a part of the command team)

Thank you for this, it says everything that needed to be said.

This is sooo good! I see Janeway as the speaker, talking to Chakotay, who she saw with Seven.