This is ridiculous not all lot makes sense, and not normal even if it's occ. You said he isn't a wimp? well he really is here he let everybody walk all over him.
-New clothes okay not much of a problem, it is when those teens decided. Came even worse with the haircut and piercings. Seriously harry normally stand up defend himself or could have taken them out! This should look bad on mr granger, more so for the dursleys proven them right. Let alone his damn image he would never want to show his scar off or blend out so much.
-How can missus granger now about harry but mr granger not doesn't make sense. Why don't they even see he's neglected/abused?
-Right being possesed while there is love presented?
-Fricking dumbles comes want to take him to the dursleys but leaves anyway? (old fool even saying harry would like to go back there)
-Humor? more like angst or something.

Well no sequel or anything whatever, don't have to read this anymore.

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Quite Very

You write the first when you mean the second.

TGM

Following an old trope that Hermione’s father doesn’t like Harry. Cattly is a wonderful OC.

TGM

I tried. Pushed on as long as I could. A bit too teenage nonsense for my tastes.

Look, Don't get me wrong, maybe this is an AU, and maybe you do give warnings about it being OOC, but I have to say, this story just clashes entirely. I can't stand it. No offense to the author, and it has nothing to do with the story or structure itself, I just dislike seeing the characters being *this* OOC. It makes me cringe anytime Hermione's dad says or does anything. And Harry's makeover? I can't express how awful that was. And yeah, despite your protests, you wrote Harry as incredibly wimpy and pathetic tbh. I'm sorry, I really really did try to like it, but I can't read any further. Best of luck with any other endeavors.

Love the prank :-)

hello. i think i can think of how harry looks. please update. good day.

Hufflepuffs are loyal

p.s. Daniel is mine for all of you Daniel Fans

I wouldn't you write that the story is abandoned? what a disappointment.

Cute

Just find it difficult to think that both Harry and Hermione would allow themselves to be steamrolled like that

beatiful

The possession plot (which I actually like) seems kinda out of place among all this cute bunch of silliness, but other than this, I love it. In fact, I'd like to see a serious (that is, non-humor) story with Voldemort possessing Harry out of blue and making him murder his friends.

Too much verprotective father in this story.

I can't read this anymore... You made harry into a pussy. If he didn't want peircing s he should've stopped that bitch Cassandra from doing it. Even then he should've taken the fucking things out... Fucking Christ...

LOL very good story I really enjoyed it keep up the food work