I am really fascinated by Kyoya's journey in this fic. I'd love to see how he grows.

I'm so happy I came across this. I'd given up reading decent Kyoya fanfictions back in 2011, and the fact that I didn't seem to navigate to this story proves how horrible I was at finding the good stories.

However, I am very sad that you never completed this. It's been nearly 10 years since you've last touched this, which is disheartening to say. I do hope that maybe you'll see my review and hope to come back to this story to give us some closure after us investing time into your characters, and for you, for investing so much time writing this beautiful piece out.

Hope to hear from you soon!

This was a great story
I wish u had finished it :(

I really enjoyed what you've written so far! I hope that you finish this!

So, it seems unlikely that this will ever be completed. But I loved it. It was sweet, and building, and rather unique idea of a broke Kyoya. Love.

Sad that this story was never finished. Its well written.

hey maybe u should make translations of the japanese words at the bottom or top of the page.

宜しい look it up

Why did you stop? You're a good writer and I liked this even if the main characters felt a little out of character to me. I could write more but I actually just gave out 16 reviews and I don't do that. So there.

That was nice. Really nice. I actually felt a bit emotional.

Nice moves, Haruhi!

This is getting a bit side-tracked. Please get to the point.

You tell a good story, even if it is a bit slow.

This is nice. A little drama.

Ah.

Well, at least Haruhi has good taste and good sense though I feel guilty over not feeling sorry for TM.