Was...my mind supposed to go to the gutter? XD

Ugh...was she horny or pregnant? I'm so naive. *shameful face* Well anyway a sequel is highly recommended, seeing how the plot is nicely done but seems so alone and in need of continuation.

Great character depth and description, too.

This is definately going somewhere, I demand you write more! :p

Why not a sequel?

interesting she has to be pregnant

Ha! I didn't see that one coming! Hmm maybe i could try that with my girl. Anyway good idea, i loved it.

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you should make a T/18 series

I liked the story P But...im young and really didnt understand what she was hiding / Was she trying emphasize she was pregnant?

Oh, and maybe you should right not just a one-shot, but a story based on 18/Trunks being together? Like if you do..make it emotional. Make 18 more than just a 1 demensional charecter ~_