Reviews for Take a Long Line
Jillian A.K chapter 3 . 4/4
Man, do I want a sequel to this. I have no idea where it would go, but I love the way you have everyone interacting and analyzing things. There's an SPN/NCIS crossover I like to pretend is a sequel to this, but I'd love for there to be a SPN/N3 one.
Sona14 chapter 3 . 12/28/2019
"when exactly did he become father to Don's whole team?" was really funny! I love this sentence 3
I also love the quote about dishonest words, because it is really good and true.
I admire this crossover and especially the argument in the last chapter. Your storytelling is really good and makes it easy to emphasise with the characters. I like it that the characters and their relationships are so good portrayed and accurate. No one felt ooc and the case was wonderful logical explained as well as the actions and reactions of everyone involved.
Also, I love the explanation Charlie tried to find for Sam's visions. It's a really cool idea and so Charlie like!
You have my greatest respect for your work and and thanks for the time you invested in this story.
Have a great day!Sincerely,
Sona
GentaLogic chapter 1 . 4/9/2018
Sorry just passing by but I thought I'd mention I totally thought it was a dating website when i read the description XD
Guest chapter 3 . 10/27/2017
Great story!
MoonLitReader chapter 3 . 10/19/2017
Love it
ManicTater chapter 3 . 12/20/2016
Read this for the third time, and enjoyed it it immensely again.
Katii0924 chapter 3 . 11/12/2016
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AlyCat3 chapter 1 . 10/28/2016
Any chance of a sequel on this? Don or Charlie find something he just can't quite explain happening and doesn't know what else to do but try to get ahold of the Winchesters?
AlyCat3 chapter 3 . 10/28/2016
Fantastic! Words don't describe just how unbelievable this is! I'll be rereading this one countless times just to make sure I get the full grasp of how awesome it is!
AlyCat3 chapter 2 . 10/28/2016
I don't know if you did this set up on purpose, but I just love that the older brother appeared to drag the little brother out of the fire like the first episode of Supernatural all over again. Extraordinary goings so far!
Catherine chapter 3 . 7/20/2016
Loved this, but don't suppose you could be persuaded to write a sequel?
lady kae chapter 3 . 4/13/2016
I like it, it's surprising
LunaBianca chapter 3 . 10/26/2015
This story is a lot of fun, thank you! It makes me interested in Numb3rs...I guess I have a weakness for brother teams. ;)
LunaBianca chapter 2 . 10/26/2015
Oh wow. Sam made a fine performance. :) I like how Charlie both connected with and dismissed Sam, but ultimately respected his intelligence.

Looking forward to Dean's jailbreak!
LunaBianca chapter 1 . 10/25/2015
I've never watched Numb3rs, but Eppes in this story feels keen and ethical. Likable. Dean is spot on, and the dialogue snaps. Really intriguing first chapter; you've hooked me! Thank you for writing.
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