Yeah use your imagination but u can also add your friends ideas but your friend's idea is kinda wellll...not nice.

leave it up to my imagination? its sucks which is y i read more of this instead of write lol! please continue it

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WOW!

great story,so great!O_O

-thumbs up-

personally i thought it was sweet o

keep writing!

FR: ôo And what's wrong with you, one might ask. If you don't like it - well, that's one thing. But ever heard of CONSTRUCTIVE CRITIC and not.. well, that what you have written? Sorry, but that is just poor. You don't even gave a reason. Guess it's the best to ignore reviews like yours, even though you may get kicks out of it - do it somewhere else.

I think it wasn't that bad, although it was too short. :c I'd also liked to have seen more of Ichigos reaction and that of the others, I think there it could have been a bit more detailed.

But otherwise it was a good job and an interesting idea (especially since I'm in my angst-preferance-phase right now %D). Maybe you'll write some more stuff?

(sorry for mistakes, English isn't my motherlanguage, so I'm not that good. oo)

aw...

kawaii...!~

How sad that Ichigo came so far only to find he was too late.