(wheezes from laughing) Howler monkey! (starts laughing harder)

This was a really fun read but ummm... I hope you don't mind me saying, WTF?

aaawww~ that was so cute! there arent many good fics of this pairing so its great to read such a fantastic one for once

CUTE!

Really good job, I loved this! XD. Wow, who knew Yugi could be vicious 0.o

Oh I loved this! LOL! Marik is just, he's awesome! Oh I love this pairing now o.o

AWW I wanted to see what yami would say once he saw this!

i thought he comes in when they kiss

and there friends with them including seto holding hands with the puppy. Yami holding hands with Tea. (Im a yamiXyugi fan. _) And then they choke on air and die!

THE END :D

OMG! That was hilarious! I loved that the cute eyes of doom worked on MARIK! That was amazing. I was in stitches the entire time!

That Was Awwsome!

um can i be marik please ill even eat a few choclates to get him started but other than that ahahahahaahahahhaahahhahahhah

Can you gonna make an sequuel to this? Please! (Puppy-dog eyes)

Wow, Yugi can defeat anybody can't he? Thats kinda scary, FUNNY, but scary. O.O

Well the way you have it, its a super cute pairing! Great Job!

wow! completely STUNNING! gods, Id never have believed one could pull off a fic with THAT pairing...well, zhe sugar-rush thing was a little bit clichéd, yes, but you wrote marik so cynically funny, one couldnt help but love him. great work!

Wow that was lickety lips sweet, kind of cute...well Yugi using his 'manipulation tactics' on Marik anyway, and way cool!

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Very believable too, Yugi's crazed obsession for his chocolate (little suprised he got away with it all)and then I knew he was gonnaa take it straight from his mouth, but geez this whole thing was brilliant descriptive and expressive and Marik's thoughts/POV was the best! Both very much in character.

And that line where 'he never imagined ever kissing Yugi' and the where he shouts that it was just getting good...lol too funny XD

Plus the real smile, thoughts of payback, prized possession (you know all these alterior motives makes it feel more real in terms of YGO verse..like if the creators could PLEASE be so inclined this would HAPPEN). Also really liked this:

"Damn that vessel and his pacifying nature! Marik hissed. I can’t believe I’m being so easily manipulated! I can’t let my guard down, not for a second! It seemed little Yugi’s sweetness was just as lethal as the Pharaoh’s God cards."

HA I love that paragraph XP and its feels so true you know...the yami's may have shadow magic and strength etc etc but little Yugi's got the best weapon of all 'Pacification at will' or whatever you want to call it...nevermind what silly way Ive named it...just came off the top of me head lol o_O;

Plus the writing all flows neatly together, and can ya just imagine Marik looking like a cold red drenched urr well rat I suppose...?

There should so be a sequel to this! Like an aftermath bit, I bet it would be funny to see Yugi's reaction upon waking (he should remember it lol) and whoever (say Yami) finds him and then maybe a little extra involving a few days or something later where they end up bumping into one another...alone or with others...lol that'd be wicked.

Still though LOVED this one. One of fav pairings and while odd this one is done particularly well *_*

..now just watch I missed something out havent I?