Oh my gosh, that was funny! XD

How could he be fourteen and not know where babies come from!

Lol, the stroke. Ow god this is hilarious, I just can't stop laughing.

The sentence in the end is so funny. But my brain exploded in some point. XD Hahahahahah! Good job!

LOL This was hilarious! Great story.

By the way, I have a friend who is as pure as Al. She is way too innocent for a girl her age. XD

And Im like Ed here..too perverted or whatever for my own good.

*sigh* why me?

My bio teacher was like, Welcome to Vagina 101. ㅡ0ㅡ She had no qualms about this at all...went about it in a technical, matter-of-fact way.

Anyways, I love how you immediately thought of this when the theme was 'Creation'. Love the title too, by the way. It describes the mood of this fic perfectly...but it seems fitting that Al is so pure like that...

Awsome! I loved the end, "yeah. a stork"... sorry...

xD I liked it Envy-chan. P It gave me a good giggle that I really needed.

o_o Wow Katie. xD That was great. Dx Al needs to grow some balls man. Or at least have someone smuggle a porno for him. (Kaitlin's rolling around my carpet man. D;) I wish I had a creepy Biology teacher that couldn't say "penis" or "testis" or "sperm" correctly. ;_;

Oh my god. I almost cried I was laughing so hard. That was GREAT! Great job!

LOL awesome challange!

Oh dear... XP Really funny.

My biology teacher went head on without hesitating, and he had all of us blushing within the next hour! xD I've never experienced a teacher that's that... WILLING to talk about creation. He was like... more.. excited and fascinated, and he wouldn't stop expressing his admiration for the wonders of the female body (seeing that he is about 60 years old makes it all a bit creepy, but he was awesome).

Oh, I was supposed to rewiev your story, heh? It was hilarious! :D I loved it, absolutely loved it! I could actually SEE it happening, and Al's innocence is adorable! Your language is great! *runs off and suddenly gets the urge to read more of your stories* ZOM!

Geez...I always enjoy your writing! You have such a talent for humor and I've never regretted putting you on my favorite authors list, Le Salle De Bain! _

Now it's time for the usual list of favorite quotes (I'm guessing you probably get this all the time...)

""Ed told me that Envy removes clothes from him all the time!"" - Wonderful. Just horribly wonderful :)

"Testis" - XD What a hilarious word! For some reason it reminds me of my sister... (I hope my teacher doesn't say that when I start Sex Ed. next week 0.o...That would be rather disturbing...)

Anyway, thank you so much for posting this! Keep up the great work! _

~AyameInLove

BTW, I love the title . It's perfect!

Oh My GOD.

LMAOS.

XD

this is INSANE!

I LOVE it!

Ed & Roy plus sex-talk with Al equals GENIUS.

this has got to be, like, on of my favorite

fics of yours xD

for sure.

I never could've guessed you, or anyone else,

would have used 'creation' in this way xD

I'm SO glad you did.

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That is a funny fanfic i must say. I couldnt stop laughing. Poor Al :( Great ending. all in all it was great :P