O M G That was Amazing! Wow.. I don't know what to say. That was just awesome! Really Good Job!

Great story!

I love that song.

The CD is really good too.

Good fic, it was awesome!

"He can see his face, laughing with him. Almost as if...

But he looks into the mirror and can only see himself."

*starts to get sad*

"As he blinks back sadness and anger, he feels a pair of arms wrap around his waist and chest like a blanket. A chin rests on his shoulder."

That line goes very well with the lyrics you put it with.

Oh yay...maybe something...

"And I begin to fade

Into our secret place.

"I didn't mean it..." It keeps whispering faintly to him, moist tongue barely outlining his. "I love you... I love you... I love...""

Oh...so it's only a memory :( Poor Sirius

"Sirius gasps sharply, teeth grinding, at the knifelike splinters on his blood-covered fist."

Ouch. *gets sad again*

"And so I cry.

The light is white,

And I see you.

Sirius can't stop thinking of him. He's let himself become too attached to him, that he can't get rid of him because everything is connected to him, everything's about him. He needs him."

I think I may start crying. It's so heartbreaking. The lyrics, what you wrote...everything

"No... he's not... He's not. He's with you, a part of you... You're a part of him... He lives in you... He's still here."

Maybe if he continues to believe that, Remus will come back.

So beautiful.

"Don't lie to yourself," he says raspily. His eyelids sink, more hot tears washing his skin.

No... he's not... He's not. He's with you, a part of you... You're a part of him... He lives in you... He's still here.

That part made me cry... *crycrycry!*

And I like the adverb raspily. :D I'm so dorky XD

You write angst really well, the mood fits this story so so so well. And it's sad but the shipping fits too. :D

Love,

JULIA :D ;O :P

Very pretty, like poetry. It confused me a little, though. Was Remus there the entire time or was Sirius imagining him?

Aww, that was lovely :3 -gives cookies- Keep up the good work!

You said you would never leave me.

I believe you.

"Believe me."

I believe.

Mm... and I'm especially in love with that there ending :D

That was a really good Fic. It caught my attention right away, 'cause I've actually been working on a SongFic to the same song. It really is such an amazing song, and it fits the SiriusRemus thing perfectly.

I can only hope my story ends up as good as yours. I loved it!