Me gustó mucho leer tu historia . Es excelente y muy bien narrado. Gracias.

Thank you for this wonderful & brilliant writing.

I liked the change this story has in that Barbara is fighting her feelings while maintaining an open-minded perspective and loving Helena unconditionally though earlier she wouldn't allow herself to love her completely.

Barbara is playing with fire; I think she's curious and taking advantage of Helena's inebriation in order to mildly explore. Baby steps.

The kitten is out of the bag (and nobody even broke their vow of silence purposefully).

Fun, I can't wait for Dick to get reamed. :D

I can't believe the commissioner doesn't tell Barbara that he had to stop Dick from being such a Dick and punching Helena.

Josie seems real nice ;)

Intresting so far but may I give you some adive? If you had an intresting summary or atleast a tad more infrmative,say 1-2 snetences, more people will eagerly read this.

Thank you for a good read.

That was awsome i loved it very good job. Thankyou for writing it:)

This screams for a follow up story :-D

I have enjoyed this story very much. Thank you.

Barbara kicks $$ and we get a Barbara/Helena hook up! Wonderful chapter!

well done..well done

and the last line..couldn't have been more perfect

I was a bit worried at times..it seemed like you were rushing it..forcing it...was it because it was slash?..or did you lose focus and inspiration.

just curious

I cant believe its over! I was really loving this story, what am I supposed to obsess over now! *pouts*

On I serious note, I'm really impressed with your writing technique and the story was just lovely. I'm glad Barbara finally came to her senses. And may I say that the last chapter was extremely HOT!

A perfect ending!

Hopefully you will write more of this pairing!

This is an all time classic!

Much Love

-Kitty