We need more chapters out what happened with the bad guy. Good story though. Nice job.

I had only read half of the last chapter before I wrote my previous comment, sorry, I still finding the ending good but not like any CSI plot, as, althought they have long story lines and plots I find the ending to inconclusive, I think you have amazing talent and despite the time I think you should most definatly write more of this story, if not this one, than anouther DL or CSI, or any story :)

I love this story and think that the only thing wrong is the gap between the two last chapters, I know it's been a while but I think you should continue to wright, if not this story than anouther D/L story.

Are you ever going to finishbthis story? It uscrwakky good and deserves an ending.

i love your story,

can't wait for the updates to come. :)

is this the end this can not be the end if it is then you realy know how to make a person mad but i heard or read wateva some where in here that there is a sequle mind tellin me that sequle

Fantastic story. great D/L, Poor linds. Update soon looking forward to reading more.

YAY! I Love it! Your a great writer a little less profanity would be nice but I'll live.

it's good I like it.

YAY! I like it now!

Ok getting better I'll keep reading :)

feeling better, but she was raped, I cant get that out of my mind I dont like it.

I want Danny in there he needs to know she needs to know that he didn't know.

I hate to be one of those that doesn't agree but I dont like what you've done. Lindsey got raped, danny doesn't know... I might stop reading if you dont clean it up soon.

you did not fix it :( I want to know what happens if they find him...