It was so beautiful; I love how you characterized them all.

I've been getting so into KisaIta lately. As it happens, I'm years too late, but I thought I'd say I loved this story anyway.

Damn, but this is an absolutely fantastic story; every moment is great, both a little hilarious and a little heartbreaking.

This is quite good. I really enjoyed it. Great job.

I know this was written a while ago, but I felt compelled to review. I love the tone of this- you've captured the characters wonderfully.

I really loved the construction of this story. I like it when they aren't linear and this reminded me of a zigzag, it kind of bounced between the twosomes in Akatsuki. I really loved the little two-sentace drabbles from various partnerships. This fic was very bittersweet, and I think it really captured the Akatsuki well.

Good story - I like how it was told from Kisame's point of view. I haven't read many stories which do him justice, but you did just that.

I was a little confused at first about the story (but that probably is just me) but I think I have it now - is from Kisame's poinnt of view as the Akatsuki members die, or when he is reminiscing? I absolutely loved the the line:

"Kakuzu survived less than half an hour longer than Hidan. Both immortals died alone, not knowing what happened to the other."

It seemed a little out of place where it was, but I still liked it. Awesome story.

You write so amazingly well! I do love how you portray the "behind the scenes" Akatsuki members. Rich and in character; lovely work!

That was so sweet :P

This is a great oneshot. Excellant writing. Very well chosen title. Very insightful.

I love how the first line becomes important to to it's contrast of the end . . . lovely interactions.

Livi

i really like this. GREAT STORY! _

keep up the good work! *thumbs up kakashi style*

This was a great, well written work, I'm truly suprised that hardly anyone has taken time to comment on this piece. I for one truly enjoyed it, especially the hot chocolate part. Very interesting read _

YOU ARE THE REASON I MADE THIS ACCOUNT! SO I COULD FAVORITE THIS FIC! This was SO amazing! I haven't read it in awhile but from what I remember it made me weep, it had insane character capturing skills, it had gorgeous detail that allowed you to get into the characters and their surroundings so well it was freaking realistic, more gorgeous detail (oh my god, kill me now! I will never find anything this beautiful, and the format, though potentially confusing, is just the kind of thing I like and was pulled off gorgeously. You. are. an AMAZING. writer. Thank you so very much for writing this. *bow*

wow i really liked that!

you should write more of this stuff!

id so love to read it