| Reviews for Odd Day Off |
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nemuriia chapter 1 . 8/16/2016 THAT IS SOO CUTE! Now that I thought about it Odd x Sissi looks so cute together. It would be nice if they have it on series I feel bad for Sissi for not having friends she can trust. |
TheGoldenYoshichu chapter 1 . 5/12/2015 This was a nice story. I liked seeing Odd and Sissi interact as well as seeing a different side to Sissi that we never get to see. Odd and Sissi are so cute together. Great job. -TheGoldenYoshichu |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2015 random time you heard cherry pie by Sade you should that Sade with an e not sad. Morag Wright |
SunnieDoodles chapter 1 . 3/31/2013 I love it! |
Harlee chapter 1 . 3/4/2011 Super cute and at a steady pace which is even better! |
Lilac Rose6 chapter 1 . 10/7/2010 AAAAAAW! THIS WAS ADORABLE! Write another, then PM me! Heehee! |
asdastrfewtfgsgse chapter 1 . 9/2/2010 You had me at the first paragraph...and lost me the second you used a curse word! I seriously hate it when writers use curses in their stories, especially in these kinds of shows where there are no swears ever used. Other than that though, you captured Odd's personality perfectly! I would imagine Sissi would be a little more stuck-up though and rarely shows her nice side unless it's a life-threating situation(aka Xana attack). The problem with these stories with Sissi in them is that they almost never have Sissi actually properly insulting the lyoko warriors or anybody for that matter, she always called Odd a dork and a loser in the show nothing too harsh just a general insult to greet him. I honestly cannot imagine her showing that she cares so quickly It's all just personal preference for me, so it's bias criticism so I'll give you this: I loved the story, I liked how you captured their personalities(for the most part), did not like the swearing. But I really did enjoy and overall it was a great story! Keep up the good work. |
lunar koi chapter 1 . 9/2/2009 huh...ya know...ive never entertained the thought of odd/sissi...its actually kinda a cute couple, good job on the story |
SnowPrincessMossy chapter 1 . 4/28/2008 That's adorable! I really like it |
Kittyclaw chapter 1 . 4/6/2008 I can't believe I didn't review this when I first found it, especially with how good it is. This story actually inspired and OddxSissi oneshot of my own, the first of my many Code Lyoko stories (so I believe I owe you a thanks for that one). But back to your story- it's very believeable, how you have Sissi move towards this kinder side without just jumping to it, and Odd's reactions to everything are perfectly realistic. I love it. |
Inkbug chapter 1 . 10/7/2007 :D This was really sweet. I LOVE Odd/Sissi and I love it when I can find a well-written one. Thanks so much for this! |
Soul Raider 116 chapter 1 . 8/1/2007 Aw! _ That's so cute. I spotted one mix up with homophones, but that was all gramatically. And Odd was so in character! I only noticed once when he didn't seem in character, and that was only because you said "do not" instead of "don't". When I'm reading the people who use "do not" always come across as more harsh, stuck-up, or brainy. I know that's not what you intended though, and it's probably just me. |
KroovyRed chapter 1 . 7/1/2007 Excellent. You didn't stem too far from the characters' actual personalities and that's what made it work. Keep on writing. |
tarotboy chapter 1 . 5/22/2007 Nice, I always thought this was an interesting couple. Maybe you should continue this. |
Nikki Narcissist chapter 1 . 4/27/2007 Aww, cute. A WHOLE NEW WORLD! A DAZZLING PLACE I NEVER NEW! |